lose the exclamation marks. and try this with the R. [Broken External Image]:http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l145/mblavis777/scarelastpage001.jpg make that little part go up into it more.
Hunger-im now a fan of you work, i have awalys liked it but now...i look forward to you stuff man...good job and keep it up!
Dusk07: I like both of them, but on the second one the D doesn't feel right. Maybe don't make the bottom-left of the D's leg go so far up? A work in progress. I've been preparing for a road trip the last couple of days, so I've been sketching here-and-there for like 3 minutes at a time. I'm thinking I should make the N more like the V? And I have writer's block as far as the E goes ... seeing as I haven't drawn it yet. And that swoosh thing is something I've seen a ton of local writers use, thought I might try it out (on paper, anyways) Anyways, crits? [Broken External Image]:http://img46.imageshack.us/img46/1213/0713072040st2.jpg
wow... i think you need to take a little more time in your peices, you can really tell you only took 3 minitues . BUT the letter structure is ok nothing new
ughh first post of a sketch in a while says mek... dusk- seems pretty simple but i would use bars still there are certain parts of your letters that dont really work out? scare- looks good but i dont like the way the s overlaps your c and i agree with the thing on the leg of your r but its a good start sinn- keep working on that it could end up reallllllllllllllllllly dope
nah, the charac is like some futurama shizzle, matt groening or whatever...if you wanna do 3d the charac is placed realle bad as it is - your D, imo, has to little space compared to the R and A (mostly the R dominates), thats always one of the harder things to get flowing imo - spaces and letters. anyway, some sketches: View attachment 289510 View attachment 289511
Drak you're getting good but try to do a different piece =P quick sketch, crits? [Broken External Image]:http://img384.imageshack.us/img384/7395/0713072217ju2.jpg *ignore the little scribbles on the bottom/top =P*
"A work in progress" = I know it's messy, and I'll clean it up after I actually draw the last letter.
HLOLS-Thanks for the crit.I like the second one alot.Just forget the background for now though and just do black and white stuff. Capo-Looks like a nice euro style from what I can see at this stage. View attachment 289512 Very sketchy.I think I made teh R smaller this time but I fucked up the arrow on it. edit:I do the same piece over and over as eventually as it'll evolve.You just have to keep tweaking it over and over to get a good solid flow and letter style.
gong nice shit keep it up, draks overall its ight, im just not feeling that space between the R and A, i dunno its probably just me new style im workin on
yeah it worked but i dont know what to say about it, i cant tell if it has structure or not but i like jesus
BLTZ - concentrate more on your letter focus for now, get a decent style down then start adding the fun shit.