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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. amk

    amk Elite Member

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    DRAK..you seriosuly need tah make it unorignal man...its oing into a basic wildstyle...dont if yah want.just a recommendation mang..

    REBuilt...welcome to BombingScience...hope to help you improve man..:)
     
  2. krazzie_ammo

    krazzie_ammo Senior Member

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  3. popshots

    popshots Senior Member

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  4. rayseone

    rayseone Senior Member

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    drak - draw a line and then try to keep all the bottoms of the letters on that line cuz your pieces always get higher as they go

    sizo - the bottom right leg is too fat, make it a bit thinner and it will look pretty good

    gold - tell you home haze to not have stupid addons, ok for five minutes tho i guess, and dont have extensions going through the middle of the O

    krazzie - dope simple, nothing else really to say.

    popshots - your letters seem to lumpy or something, pick a theme and carry it through every letter, look at some of whappens throws to see what i mean, their is something that carrys through in each letter.
     
  5. REAL..

    REAL.. Member

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    bump...

    bump for crits still begining of new style needs work but idea is there :)
     
  6. amk

    amk Elite Member

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    look at other writers original things they put in..sumthing really diffferent...like Revoks signature E...or Cali / LA writers signature styles...and Philly hands...just sumthing..that really seperates your shit..from the other shit that someone else has done man..your gonna be good...how old are you..?

    REAL.-quit bumboin your sketches over and over....you shudnt even be thinking of new styles...you shud be thinking of no style at all and working basic..
     
  7. rayseone

    rayseone Senior Member

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    real - i would say go a lil simpler, but dont forget about those sketches, come back to them in like a month or so of doing simples, then try the ideas then and they will look alot better, youve got some good potential becuz you have good coloring skills. when i say do simples though, dont mean like completely satraight letters, just do them the odd time, just like find structure, by slanting your letters different ways, bending bars here and there, also try to work on the sizing of your letters, they seem to get smaller as they go along. maybe draw 2 lines and try to keep your letters in between there.= like that kinda. and like amk says quit bumping juts do new ones.
     
  8. FIN one

    FIN one Senior Member

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  9. kosher

    kosher Senior Member

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    krazzie i like it alot man
    fin that's gonna be sick when you're done
     
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  11. siZo

    siZo Member

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    Krazzie.. That looks smart as mate!

    Pop, Not bad but im not sure on you m, maybe miss out the bump on the top left??

    Real.. Just not feeling it.. your would be better if you changed the right leg, but dont like the rest, sorry.

    Fin - Thats looking good, love those colours!!!

    Chalk - surely you do not need to post here, your definetly not a toy! :D nice as fuck!!

    Baze - I like it but what is that paper all about ?? :D

    Crits please...

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  12. kosher

    kosher Senior Member

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  13. Drakula

    Drakula Elite Member

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    Fin:The first letter,the character and the bubbles look really dope but the other side of the character needs work.I can't read it and it doesn't make sense.

    View attachment 290000

    Just trying out new things with the bubbles.Wish I had more room for the K.
     
  14. kosher

    kosher Senior Member

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    the other letter is an "s" and i'm assuming it's supposed to read "bos"
     
  15. molotow_15

    molotow_15 Elite Member

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    work on the arrows they lack flow and look immature

    the letters are also bulker than some others..
    it looks wrong

    work on it
    then repost
     
  16. -ShAmEE-

    -ShAmEE- Elite Member

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    err mate..dont worrie about tryin to make it orginal yet, still keep messing around with them letters. and learning the stucture of them letters. then when you do this then u find ur style, cuz u will start remaking the letter to ur fancey so in the end u killin one bird with two stones.
     
  17. F.R.A.T.

    F.R.A.T. Senior Member

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    drak start trying extensions and wat not
    cause skeelo to me to
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  18. -ShAmEE-

    -ShAmEE- Elite Member

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    umm..first one is okay...secound i like. but please take out the arrows.
     
  19. Scare2

    Scare2 Senior Member

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    drak im lovin the stuff ur doin. one thing i was thinking is an abstract 3D style might go nicely with the letters.
     
  20. glass

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    frat: i like the second one, that E (although generic) is done well. keep it up and maybe a few less arrows.

    yeah so most of you know i can do better than this so dont hold it against me, just messing with a new style which i need to work more with the individual letters. anyhoo, crits?

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    ^didnt know what to do with the space that was under the A so i extended the S, probly should have re done the A

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    ^thought of this sitting at the computer, i think its in a good direction