tryin something new out...uninished S

worth tryin to develop this style?
i like the A most

 

it looks dope as it is
not diggin the arrows though, in my opinino i think you should start sketchin other shit and not get caught up in one piece and not be able to try dif "styles"

 

taste: pretty neat stuff dude, i'd like to see it again if you clean it up more though

back to my decent solid style, working on painting it too. crits?

 

glass, like the style but letters look over extended imo

 

clean up your lines to make the edges more sharp it's hard to see the actual shape of your letters with all the sketchy stuff still there.

 

drak- i like it but not a big fan of those arrows..and i agree with emel experiment more cause thats a solid style u got down
glass-nice but the line in the middle of the a is weird looking try making it straight
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tryin out new styles crits...

 

this isn't directed explicitly at you nasr but on the large scale, people need to stop "trying out new styles" and just get something simple and solid down under their belt. learning the basics will make building and developing your style(s) will become more natural, things will just kinda fall into place.

as for your piece, it'll be much more aesthetically appealing if you have curves complimenting your hard angles and straight sections of your letters. it is real difficult to make hard, angular letters have flow and curves look sexay.

 

nasr, it just looks really blocky to me.

drak, youve got K's down to a science my friend. XD

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dont ask...

 

done enough for me
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samp that s is fire, this is just personal prefrance but i think ur m and p are to fat

 

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crits please.
The second one is just 3-D so rate my 3D

 

simples. is ur answer.

 

dont really know where i should be posting, so i thought id play it safe and post here



sorta ran outa room on my "Z" on the second last one.
im not to good at E's.
crits, comments, all welcome

 

bump because its just soo tight.

 

too lazy to finish this

 

samp - diggin it all, jus not feelin the p to much

 

hungr- feelin that u and r , overall its pretty good

 

sample- really sick dude
hade- you posted in the right spot, try to keep your letters level with eachother(second one mainly) and ur "extensions" place in random spots. ide say dont pick up a marker till u get good with just letters.
scare and drapes-go back to simples, like way back
hungr- not bad but not your best

EVERYONE, START WITH SIMPLES. SIMPLES SIMPLES SIMPLES!!!