i agree wit ray, try jamin ur letters together, and like adding extensions and stuff, also play with the line thickness, uniform isnt interesting
yea, but uve got it now, so sketch away..perhaps look at pieces and study thier style, like the connector ideas and the flows and stuff, dont bite, just use it and incorporate it into your style, and improve on it
NO NO NO, revolt dont start adding extensions yet, not to be mean but i think youve got the idea of bars and you know what you need to work on, you need to work on structure lots, look at what makes a letter a letter, you dont need style at this point. all i would say is try to draw for like 10 mins a dayevery day, and if its a good day, sometimes that will turn into like an hour, you will notive results. but anyway enough with chat, more pics
Drak lookin fuckin awsome i think the characters head looks a lil big but w/e did this waitin for a bus View attachment 290382 crits?
drak u see how wen u drew the paint can one end is curved up and the other end curved down make sure there both curving in the same way everything else is good
all i have to say about this is. mediocre letters. obnoxious colors. and my blue marker died.... sad day. i was feeling bizarre today.
ahaha hell yes drak. ur gettin really good with your style and switchin it up in small steps i really like the progression of it. sinn- its a nice simple. maybee go a lil further next time. chalk- creative and clean as usual. i like the faces but im not as sure about the teeth in the C. i would really wana see some wilder styles from you. theyd be sick. lil skip- its pretty good. id say move the C back away from the A a little. and keep your letters more or less the same thickness but its looking good. nice and simple. also go to the new to graph thread on the forums and check out what it says about bars and such. its really helpfull for structure. shame- it looks really good but its hard to see all the lines and the structure watch the size of the letters. (the left got a little smalller) and make sure it is all on an even level. but it looks really good. put some ink on it.
SHAME - fuckin ill, i dont think i can crit it CAUR - try to keep the bottem of the letters in the same place and back up the C like scare2 said just some boring one letter black and whites and a new charak (photobucket's edit was broken so the second two are sideways) [Broken External Image]:http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g274/AKpress/DSCN0062.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g274/AKpress/DSCN0060.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g274/AKpress/DSCN0064.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g274/AKpress/DSCN0063.jpg
sekt, character looks quite good, letters need toning down, too much stuff going on. oo pencilly. i would like to say, this is not a new name, but an alternate one to pear.