baser- i think if the leg f the R was more straight down, it would look better but good none the less

 

krazie, im down with that simple. Would you ever do me one?

 

baser: pretty nice dude, i like that E but work on the B and R a little

crits?

 

I dig the G and A glas

 

*GLAS*
the G looks fly just get rid of the break at the top
the L theres two parts |_ and this part _looks way off try beefing it up a bit
the A looks straight to but again get rid of the break on the bottom
the S wow its all types of fucked up try using the big block part for the right bar instead of the curved one

 

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hahaha- chalk pulls it off again....dope man

^^tick- y do u still continue to try? all your stuff looks the same and isn't improving at all, go to blocks or sum shit, tired of seein the same old piece of shit, that never seems to go anywhere

 

simple

Chalk- thats tite

 

lilskip - nice simples. the 3d is a bit messed up on the inside of the A . and also now work on keeping all the bars he same width. they seem to get fatter letter to letter.

 

drak ur d looks less like ur other letters style wise.

 

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Hey dajam the second one looks quite ole righty, perhaps you could emphasize your letter structure with a brighter outline of each letter, just a thought.

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i know there really bad but any sugestions on makeing them better

 

doesnt look like the d fits in to good, fix up yur k,have patience yu odnt get good overnite, jus practice

 

K what you wanna do is make simple block letters, like bolded computer font pretty much. then after that is add bends make it marshmellowy if u want and add your flair too it, keep it simple though your just starting out.

 

bro drak can you do anything else.......im tired of seeing the SAME pic(style) over and over...

 

why does no one go to the new to graff thread anymore if they no they are bad
-dark to to new to graff thread

 

Dark: not sure what else to say other than point you to the new to graff thread. it'll be much easier for you to see how to improve than listen to comments without an actual example

BUMP for crit... yo...

 

I know my hnadies SUCK COCK! But I wanna know about my character. I know the EYE is off too. But overall haha.

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