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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.
i would work on that hand style some more.
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chalk- not bad it looks a lot like a style i had a while ago lol
capo-you colored outside of the lines. jkjk i cant really see the letters go back in and thicken the outline or something
for the nokia thing. not the best but o well it was a good way to spend an hour getting used to different letters. crits please
damn...your cantrol is soo dope...wy tah imrove eh..i wub you.
fin...theres about 3 different form of letter in there....sum typeish Gesu I...basic O ... and oldskool type A N....they look aightt...id just say stick to one style...and keep it flowin gna meen...good work fella.
no offense amk but ur a lil retarded. he said he photoshopped it to see what it would look like on a wall haha. no beef just playin but he did say that. thanks for the crits and now that u mention it the I is a little gesus reminiscent lol o well i really only like the a and n. but meh, i think im improving and thats all that matters
ahaha..ahaha shit i didnt even notice..
duuuuh...another dumb moment by dumb shit ras..
Capooo...feelen that fillll....throw sum inks on that bith ahaha....get a big phat marker....and make teh letters pop...itll look schweet.
chalk - not bad, i dontr like how the top bar of the F cuts down so much, not feelin the L kinda looks akward maybe try thinning the bottom bar alil and givin it more curve instead of the clean angle or have the left bar of the A shoot down and over top some of the bottom bar of the L . . .the 2 Ts are idnetical to each other whixh is good, looks like you have the same problem with teh top horizontal bar of teh T like i do, still havent locked in on a nice T yet . . . the middle thin straight across bar on the S doesnt really mathc cuz all your bars are the same width except that one, i also dont like how the middle thin bar of teh S goes straight across from one end of the letter to the other . . . but i would look to add some thinner bars to mix in with teh other wider bars, going from thin to wide or having thin and wide bars really opens up alot of doors to where you can take your style next . . .
ill try and edit-post some recent scribbles in here . . .
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^^^^ 2 oldies, sorry if uve seen them before i just really dig how my fills where rockin back then . . .
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just stumbled across a pic of this half doen canvas, i totally forgot about this one and its nowhere to be found in my crib, fucking sucks it looks like it was a pretty good start
heres something to ruin the page ....
morning shizzle cba with 3d and it was all sketch but i cleaned it up...
gotta love extensions i was tryin to see how many i cud use!
thats looking better than some of the other stuff ive seen from you . . some of the letters are lumpy (teh left side of the 2nd A, top half of L) . . if i was you i would step my shit back alil and work on gettin more comfortable with bending your bars and trying to develop a nice stylish simple letter that u can then use to build on by adding tabs and lil dodaads like you got and later full on extension/addons . . . your best and only good letter in my opinion are your Es, maybe study them and see why they work and what it has that the other letters dont . . .
cheers it was only a 5 minute thing but it needs work i know and that second A is an O lol its badly done yeh the E's look better i dno why i just need to practice i guess... thanks for the crit much appreciated...
Skeelo i love that canvas too bad you can't finish it
REAL that are some nice sketches, i like that style you should definetly do something with those although maybe you need to look at the arrow cause that looks a bit toyish
and that Nokia ting is pretty ill!
here's something i sketched last night tell me what you think
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also what do think about the tag underneath it???
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i need some help with the A here cause i have no idea of what A would look good here
crits needed ... just speak on a few things i just smashed this up on paper in about 30 minutes so ... would liek people to say wot there think, considering it was quick in my few
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any otehr ideas ... it was a quick freestyle in a rush aswell.
2 kos that oneliner is dope!
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Kos- that shits illin bruv!!!
Star- fatten your letters up abit mate, and make your letters more defined as i cant read what it says man, kee practicing though.
why lie, it doesnt look ok, it looks like crap. thewit needs to go to the new2graff thread and do some block letters for a while.
Wit and Star try checking the new 2 graff thread
new piece..no addons no arrows only letters and i finally managed to find a way to write my whole name
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can i have a few more crits please?
alright heres my crits...
Tron the best thing i could say to help you would be to do what sketch said.
and then truthfully all the other things have been given all the crits they need.
vice decide between holes or lines in your letters, the A K has holes while the S T has lines...if that makes sense...make it consistent throughout and it will flow nicer also be consistent in "ends" i dont even know what to call it but look how your T is "sharp" at the top and the rest of the bomb is rounded...the letters are somewhat inconsistent in style, the A & K are pretty much the same style while the T is its own and so is the S...probably because your A & K are a mix of round shapes and rounded corners while the S is very bubbly, as for the T fix up what i said before...do taht up and re-post
NOKIA BATTLE i wish i put highlights but i didnt have a white pen
I personally like your letters torn id just like to see them beside eachother instead of on top of eachother.
Separate names with a comma.