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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. Nem

    Nem Elite Member

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    bumpo. got no crits.

    mindormatter, the second e has a nice and solid fill. looks good. keep messin with other stuff though.

    breakout, thats all around pretty bad. use a simpler bar structure. then try to do that kinda stuff again after a ton of practice.
     
  2. South-Pole

    South-Pole Elite Member

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    Alive-looking good
    Drak-weird@you progressing so fast,but most of your pieces look alike each other.
    enve-nice simple but the fill kills it
    Break out-loose the arrows and try making keyboard letters

    RIP pencil sketch

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  3. sky_one

    sky_one Senior Member

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    south-pole- your in the right track
    ai191.photobucket.com_albums_z270_sky_oner_graff1.jpg_c90cdf17218d4249e0cf7edb565ecde8.jpg some crits please
     
  4. Chalk

    Chalk Senior Member

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    sky if you don't start using bars i might just slap you. do simples the same height. same width. clean lines. and no bends.
     
  5. sex without condoms

    sex without condoms Elite Member

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  6. amk

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  7. N.O.T.E

    N.O.T.E Senior Member

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  8. silentchaos14

    silentchaos14 Elite Member

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  9. c.n.k

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  10. Nem

    Nem Elite Member

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    neuro? i like that type of style, and you're just about pulling it off. i say exaggerate some more things so you can make it symmetrical on both sides. i think that would look pretty ill. color that shit.
     
  11. Chalk

    Chalk Senior Member

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    nice posts from Alive, and Drak.

    CNK kinda feelin it. work on it some more i think you can bring it where it needs to go.

    based of a pen freestyle at work
    aimg.photobucket.com_albums_v495_k_vandal_chalkfree.jpg
    i can't do fades with markers...
     
  12. SOOF

    SOOF Senior Member

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    chalk - nice shit, diggin the colors, maybe try some new letter styles ?? But overall i like it
     
  13. AnteUp

    AnteUp Elite Member

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    chalk i dunno about the h, but the 3d is awesome, so yea...
     
  14. silentchaos14

    silentchaos14 Elite Member

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  15. sex without condoms

    sex without condoms Elite Member

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    got nothings and im too missed by uhhh to just have this sit hereee

    cheuuu<33333
     
  16. Bazer

    Bazer Moderator

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    ugh.. sorry dude i just dont know what to say. your structure for your style's really solid man.

    some of you might remember this.. i bearly finished it... haha..

    ai190.photobucket.com_albums_z227_bazer6_ebook_SP_A0939.jpg
     
  17. jersOneTIC

    jersOneTIC Senior Member

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  18. sex without condoms

    sex without condoms Elite Member

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    dont hide the E as much.

    Baze has the illest style in the toy forum.
    get outta here *****hh
     
  19. rayseone

    rayseone Senior Member

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    baze - that shit is illlll, im loving that R, not bad for a japanese dude haha jk.

    jers, i think its kinda weak compared to some of your others, work on that r especially

    kovr - dope sutff man, loving the style u got going on there

    chalk - illll, maybe dont bring the horizontal bar of the K out so much but kick it back/in a bit more.

    monre - i dont lik ethe circle parts of each letter, idunno

    fuck im tirred, crits?
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  20. whynot?

    whynot? Senior Member

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