Took your advice, tried it with no conections and a hella lot simpler...came out like dis I dun exactly like it...but hey, Im a toy
just did these. dont mind the suck backgrounds. fune and kover collab. fune left without outlining his so it aint done yet nigross and the second canvas i painted over hence why it is so whack
AMUNIN , KOVE , TEZE , ALIVE Sick shit View attachment 293467 My VS entry.. crits on my letters.. hehe
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^^^ outline it with some other color and it would be tight i would make that G a little bit bigger, and the thing coming off the bottom smaller.
View attachment 293498 View attachment 293499 ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ Bump for these dudes. they puttin in work. View attachment 293500 View attachment 293501 View attachment 293502 View attachment 293503 View attachment 293504 View attachment 293505 View attachment 293506 View attachment 293507
[Broken External Image]:http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l145/mblavis777/media1-5.jpg should i keep goin with this kinda oneliner style?
Sooo... I've been sketching a tad. Just a bunch of simples. Crits plzzz. [Broken External Image]:http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u258/skaa_bucket/DSC_0703.jpg
View attachment 293541 View attachment 293542 For Rank(ebs) View attachment 293543 Ceok- You're on the right track, but your name is ugly. ceok. Nem- those arent bad. I'd stick with em.
ceok the one with the perspective 3d isnt bad, you got the structure the best on it. keep working off that among I like the general concept of the top pics letters, just keep working at the structure, the best letter is the m [Broken External Image]:http://img294.imageshack.us/img294/6918/001ai3.jpg
Nem- Personally i dont like one liners, too hard to distinguish your letters, i would say ditch the one liners Ceok- The first pic is so blurry it makes my head hurt but your on the right track, just now start using bars to construct your letters cause not all of them seem to be made of bars, the second is ok except for the e, get rid of that long extended part and make everything uniform and proportionate Garbage- The first one im definitely not feeling at all, its too lumpy and doesnt flow, the second though is real fresh i like it. For the first one, your ms are too deformed try to make them look more like simpler ms, and the gs need alot of work as well Sou- An s with a k? Idk if thats right but yeah its real clean and like all your other stuff its fresh and original, nice man Seyar- Looks nice man, maybe retrace and work on the cleanliness, but the basic structure is good [Broken External Image]:http://img378.imageshack.us/img378/6121/dsc00173ux6.jpg Crits? Says Phatso...
edit - the sheep, i actually like that sketch man, that T is pretty ill, the diggaz one from way back was not bad either, just try not to keep your letters so open, like the one peice in the battle the letters were too open and morphed into each other too much if ya now wat i mean, that one is alot better tho sou i told you before, i like that man keep it up, the vertical paart just seems a bit to skinny among - good simples, keep it up, not feeling the rank throwie much tho ceok - use bars, do simples etc, check the new to graff thread teze - dope ish, i havent seen muhc from oyu in a long time, your characs are fresh man messy throwie wn 30 second fill crits? [Broken External Image]:http://img398.imageshack.us/img398/650/seyarju5.jpg
sheepy baaaaaa- i like it, i love the cartoonyness of it but i would make the A more defined tho. Seyar- always liked your stuff that throwie is dope as.
Homey, you don't have to show us everytime you make new block letters. Try bending some bars a little bit and overlapping the letters. Keep the block concept though. No addons either. Or bumps. peace.
what the fuck...5 posts of complete bullshit. Sky .. keep doing those blocks. fuck crazy shit you aint ready.
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