Alive- pretty much what casa said.

Uhh- it's cool, but your stuff is definitely better without all the crazy shit.

Reps- sketch out the actual bars for now. that'll help. (the throws are pretty nice though.)

Hungr- I like where it's goin, just not the U.

Amok- new to graff thread NAO.

Amk- i'm not a really big fan of vandalsquad (problably because i cant do it at all. my mouse is jittery.)
I like your other style better than the MOE one.

Sheep- I really like it, but don't put the same extension on the bottom of too many letters.

Nobody really gives crits in the character thread
more practice with a sharpie.

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bump me if I get bottom of page'd, please.

 

amok go to the new to graph thread and start with bars. graff isnt just about doing complex rediculous pieces. youve gotta start with simple styles.
the second one down would be tight if you left it at the top green lettering and killed the lightning bolt in the O.


reps i dont like the little extensions on ur Es. but i really like the style its pretty dope with the simple coloring.


hungr yours got a little bigger as it went but its tight as allways.

reps 2nd post.. your M and A are straight ill. the middle of youre E got too fat and out of control and on the K i think maybee angle the top right bar into the other leg a little so it connects to both leggs?? im not sure.


alive- i dont like the bottom left orange arrow. but the style is tight. thats one of the ones you posted a couple days ago in a huge batch right?

uhhhh. Solid.

 

near says: im not really sure what you are talking about i dont even paint that shit i just dropped in his book took like 45 seconds

(wack fill but..)

 

Cheers for crits guys.
Near those are some sick sketches i love the fills.
Captain the Char is nice, shadings good aswell.

For my sister.
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Crits?

 

Pretty dope...a little overboard as you said but I dig the steez...You should keep going with that shit.

 

repsSDN- it looks alright except on the last bit of 3-d where it looks like yur marker died, maybe get a new marker and fix that cuz it sticks out really bad. and the right leg on the R looks a little weird cuz its so skinny

 

near- no need to get all offended

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and somethin quick since i been so damn busy with sticker exchanges n battles, figure'd i'd do somethin quick on my day off of work
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ohh baby.
sume said its prett dope.
oh boyo!
haha.
for real though, that does actually mean a lot-ish.

 

FEELEN IITTTT !!!

and word. Uuuuh
it does mean alot when you say your shit is dope Sumoeinho

god damn..i need sumone to motivate me to sketch
this LRPD shit is addictive
And collbaerations are just sick to doo

uugh HEEELPPP !

 

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hungr - near's shit is always dope
repsSDN - i dont like that Big gap on the u
Borg - def. feelin it
RemoZ - the last letters are too separated from the rest
just did this like an hour ago...
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and this one
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Jers your first J is really hurtin. but i like the 2nd J a whole lot.


has some flow issues i feel... and once again the K is my weakest letter FUCK YOU K.

 

I've been in a slump all summer...fucked with drawing comics for a little bit, wanna go a little further with it. But, Today is the end of Sume's writer's block. I'm going to SKETCH! Well, just thought I'd share that with you people.

Anyways onto crits.

Good shit Chalk, never liked your "K" all that much and there seems to be something lacking in some of your pieces. The "H" is also a little awkward, looks too bendy. Good stuff, though.

Jers, second piece is heat. Character is a little ugly, but the letters are solid.

Dope shit, Cile. Clean and nice letters.

Alive, good letters bro, but you should try bending them up a little more, keep playing with shit.

 

yea idk thats why i put maybe with an arrow with maybe
it might look more like a y
and i just wanna say this
bass is hellz fun

jesus christ fresh

dope except the e's top extensions
your r is awesome
shit, sorry mods
thanks a bunch for combining my shit

 

chalk- the h could use some work, it looks fuckin crazy, other than that i'm feelin chalks og flow

sume- can't wait to see some new ish from you, hopefully your not too rusty

 

pieceee

chalk im diggen it but the little teeny tiny extensions on the middle right side of the H and bottom left of the A look out of place
NEM when you do bars you dont have to make them all going outwards to make it lok good, try to work with the flow of ONE letter at a time


just did this
decided to make the O a little mescan character with a beanie on which i have to work on i suck at characters.... but it says
RESO crits please
alive i really like thos letters but id likie to see what they look like painted!
REMOZ i really like the simples in the background but the big thing doesnt look s like the ltters are too spaced out


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Shot at 2007-08-03

 

Near- Fresh paints. Did you do the band-aid?

Random shits. Blackbooks and magnets. I know, the Zoo outline is fucked up, but I kinda likes it. I wouldn't paint that shit tho. Haha!

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late night sketches!!!

 

cezr, i stared at the pic for a few minutes at least.
reuh good simples..

went crazy on a plane
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