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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. Scare2

    Scare2 Senior Member

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    sky ur gettin better but go study up on how to do shadow properly cuz that 3D shadow or wutev is whack. just keep goin tho. and dont do crowns man.

    tac- go to the new to graf thread. i hate to say it but right now some of ur stuff is whack. its got potential tho keep it simple and use baars to create ur letters.

    sema the letters are solid but the poofs at the top bug me out. id take em off.
    and sky again - ur kersr piece is an improvement keep it up.


    roolete- dope style i dont feel the background so much tho. its too confused,,

    something i did today i kinda like how it came out. i did some editing on photoshop but im too lazy to post the edited version.
    ai201.photobucket.com_albums_aa170_iancarroll7_jenal.jpg
     
  2. thesilentvandal

    thesilentvandal Banned

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  3. ginzer1

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  4. tagkc

    tagkc Member

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    ginz- not feeling the whole color thing or the background. stick to just making good letters for now. make sure its all even too as your last letter doesnt go as far down as the rest. you gotta make it flow. good G tho i like it.
     
  5. Scare2

    Scare2 Senior Member

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    yeah ginzer, go to the new to graf thread on bombing science
    http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/showthread.php?t=2185

    look it over and allways remember that shadow and 3D allways have to be consistent. think of shadow like an exact copy of ur letters shifted in a direction equally throughout the piece.

    Tac u might also benefit from the link^ its got some really good stuff even an experienced writer should check back on the basics every now and then.

    but go to the link and just read all of it. pay attention to what it says about bars and flow also. thers some good tutorials on there.
     
  6. sky_one

    sky_one Senior Member

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  7. tagkc

    tagkc Member

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    sky - i like it but if you fixed your "Y" up a little bit to kinda flow with the S it would look better. colors are good, would be better if it was marker and could blend a little better. but nice job
     
  8. Mo152

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    sky no need to color yet and just for once.. make every letter with a straight bar nor curves in the bars just str8.. i gotta give iit up to you for keepin at it tho you postin pics like crazy

    vandal looks perrty good cept for the e only part i dont like but the rest is good

    scare looks great man love the blue and yellow bubbles

    roolete DOPE cept for the lil fella in the O but other than that DOPE!

    sema fellin the style could be develped more... however dont like the fuckin smoke stacks o w/e the fuck they are
     
  9. eMJayBee

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  10. tagkc

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    emjay- i think your using too many diff colors. stick to one color scheme right now. i like the green and the blue/purple. pick one for the whole piece and then you will kno what to shade the 3d in. i dont like that maroon/poopy color for the 3d. good shit tho
     
  11. Stim

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    I just wanted to say, that this is good. If you're doing it quickly then it's really good and you should keep it up. But work on the top of the "O" and the bottom of the "S"

    PS- I want to see a diffrent color forcefield
     
  12. N.O.T.E

    N.O.T.E Senior Member

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    bump for crits
     
  13. sky_one

    sky_one Senior Member

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    note- that is dope
    emjay-i think you use tu much colors
     
  14. SOOF

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    tryed something new i guess, crits ?
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  15. thesilentvandal

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  16. AyteYourCookies

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    Bazer Moderator

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    cuz u dont give em.
     
  18. AyteYourCookies

    AyteYourCookies Senior Member

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    [Broken External Image]:http://i165.photobucket.com/albums/u55/str8gangsta_01/Picture246.jpg
    oink - is say make your bars more boxlike and clean it up.
    jenal - maybe try doing actual holes in you letters.
    silentvandal - looks nice.
    stim - looks hot, that s reminds me of a la style
    note - reminds me alot of baze, i dont like the lower extension on the a but other than that its cool.
    soof - simples
    silentvandal - i dont like the upside t type thing on the bottom of the a
     
  19. blue.steel

    blue.steel Senior Member

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    ^^^
    make letters same size
    and those dots dont relly work
     
  20. AyteYourCookies

    AyteYourCookies Senior Member

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