independent-simples capitol-nice keep it simple 1nOnly Baze-thats dope man bigel-wow really love your style man Gumdrop.Behemoth.-simples
why do you always try to call out people worse than u sky is only saying shit is dope, etc its not like he is giving rank pagelong crits to writers like 5 months infront of him, some people dont mind hearing good effort or something for putting in work im not trying to be a dick, but the same goes for you gumdrop just do some fucking simples, your trying to go way beyond what your capable of and unfortunately it looks shit, trust me man you say you dont wanna do simples but it will make your graff ten thousand times better.. you got no structure. stop posting, go draw it will help much more. amk - the idea is there, but i think the bottom of the letters are a buit too crowded and the top seem so much simpler, i have been having the same problem wen im fucking around with extensions, good shit tho. moe will be killin it too yee seti - im not really a fan of the 3d style, but that shit pops man, i like, good work ayte - if you took the huge extension of the A, it would look nice and simple but stylish at the same time, just keep screwing around with it bigel - glad to see you back man, i missed your throws, ill shit
yeah its not like sky is giving bad crits anyway. everyone can go back to simples every now and then to refresh their style. never hurts. and seti if thats photoshop ur a fuckin gangster with it. go into graffic design or something and make big money
Heres a piece i just did. Im trying expand my horizons a little bit. I need crits before i outline and fill please. I already fixed a few spots that were missing the 3d. [Broken External Image]:http://img520.imageshack.us/img520/8254/dsc02404ym4.jpg
tagKC man u gotta go to the new to graff forum and start with bars and simples. i was the same way when i first came on here a while ago and i thought it was pretty retarded but it makes ur letters way more solid really fast. just go check out the new to graff thread and read the whole thing. i did this hat a couple days ago. other than the floating N what do ya think?
tagkc, u cant expand your horizons without first having a foundation man. i know people just say use simples, do simples, go back to simples, go more simple, the fact is its really the only fix. your not going simple enough. your lines arent clean, the thickness of your letters are off. your extentions dont look good. this is not something that happens over night man, u have to work at this shit. its a must. dont expect to have something decent within a week, a month, and im some cases a damn year. i dont post a lot of my stuff unless i need to hear someone tell me its shit. anyway, my crit to u is go A LOT MORE SIMPLE. end. scair, u should float it all, they are simple and look ok. but your handy rock is bad. graff biased clothing is everywhere, and had to make it in. u need some street cred nukka. keep at it. -fube-
uhh r u serious again fuck man iight instead of tell me it has no structure can you plz point out the parts that make you think that and wat do you think about this sketch:
ur we u is too skinny, u r could be a k, but ir ST isnt bad, i actually really like ur s [Broken External Image]:http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k18/thebucketofphotos/werst1.jpg
your s t is pretty good, actually that is prolli the best thing you did so far, there is no stupid extensions, ones that like wrap around letters andd connect to letters just randomly in the middle of a bar you know what i mean? there seems to be a few different styles kinda mixed into 1 but its all good, take out where the letters connnect with each other, it doesnt look good, maybe try to draw a flat line on a peice of paper and try to keep the bottom of your letters on the line, it may make your stuff look better, take what frat told you and make the bars throuhgout the peice the same width, you will notice if some bars are alot skinnier just by looking at them, if they are not the same thickness, redo them. just keep sketching it will come soon enough, dont force extensions though, remeber extensions dont make your letters better letters, any decent writer will look at the foundations of your letters. look at your keyboard, you will notice that the S is probably the best letter there, and funnily enough it lookks like the s on your keyboard, just a bit tweaked, thats kinda what all your letters should be like right now. once you get better, you will loook and think what was i thinking putting that there, why didnt i bend that herew etc, its just part of the learning curve fuck that was long, hope i helped
that you so much that all i every wanted was just one or two good ass crits and im set thank you and i will now stop doing all the stupid shyt i do lol edit: but i still dont see wats wrong wit the baze piece on the other page i dont have any stupid extension except for the things around the z
I went ahead and colored this piece anyways. I like the K and the S minus a few extentions. C's are really hard for me. [Broken External Image]:http://img252.imageshack.us/img252/3389/dsc02408mm9.jpg
yeah werst imma agree with fube an them with the letter stucture like you can see how the bars in the letters dont meet up, and yeah the first two letters are a bit small..dont take the crit the wrong way just listen and take it in and you can get better, because honestly in graff you can ALWAYS be better.. an S.. i was bored.. so i decided.. fuck it.. ill draw an S.. i started to draw an A.. and i ABSOLUTLY hated it.. its gross.. so i stopped and shaded the S..lol.. crits?.. if ya got em
o and dont mind the S above mine.. thats my buddies attempt at an S..its WAK i know i told him already..lol
frat-not much to say, its good i especially like your t tagkc-hmmmm it just looks like a jumble of lines to me, bars dial-good shading and shape, i dunno if i like those arrows tho