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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. Sou - Mvd

    Sou - Mvd Senior Member

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    Reap- if you lost the arrow on the r (arrow look pretty out of place with that style)and just changed it to be more like the other extension it would be a pretty decent letter. you're a and p look very awkward in that piece, they are missing the flow, and you're e is to skinny in some places. I like the effect on the letters though, maybe a little over the top but nothing wrong with that.

    tagkc- asides from your letters which im sure everyone is telling you to work on, look up 3d vanishing points and work on your 3d.

    ayte- digging your letters, kick the bottom of your y to the right a little bit though.

    just something im working on and some random trash

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  2. rayseone

    rayseone Senior Member

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    samp - ill shit, i like them teeth too, he must use crest white strips

    sou - dopppe throws

    ayte - looks good simple but stylish

    nasr- best u did, just keep working on it

    im too tired to critt

    was talking to amk bout extensions, and this came out haha, result of pencil and boredom, and helicopters, i tihkn some work but some are fucked lol crits?
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  3. Dinan 3er

    Dinan 3er Senior Member

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    raysone: looks really good. The K is kindof funky you might want to simplify it a bit.

    I like what you did with the Y tho. Y is a hard letter.
     
  4. rayseone

    rayseone Senior Member

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    thats cuz its not a k yo its a r ha
     
  5. Chalk

    Chalk Senior Member

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    cnk - i think the 2nd one is the best.

    sou - love that 2nd pic a whole lot also esp. that pink and black one.

    been a while since i have drawn anything. eh letters. goopy slime. crappy coloring oh my!
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  6. KASE2

    KASE2 Elite Member

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    C.N.K. - ey yo shit iz sick homie. stay up
    CHALK - im feelin tha extras on ur piece (bubbles etc.)
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    ey crits on this plz. fo sho
     
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  7. Proper-issh

    Proper-issh Banned

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    I kinda like the BG on this. It will look better once you got all yo' skillz down dawg.
     
  8. BIGel

    BIGel Elite Member

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  9. Mo152

    Mo152 Senior Member

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    ^^^ teach me?

    chalk looks perty good

    ray.. i can see how he got the k you shoulda pushed every thing up cuz it whole rite on the R is lowwer then the rest an get rid of the part that makes it look like a k and well itl look perty dope

    EDIT: GOD FUCKIN DAMMIT I HATE THIS SHIT WHEN IM THE FIRST ON A NEW PAGE!!
     
  10. Nem

    Nem Elite Member

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    bamp.

    letters okay?
     
  11. Sou - Mvd

    Sou - Mvd Senior Member

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    Nem digging the multi colour inline, just work on those letters, try straighting some of them out, it's quite difficult to pull off a proper bubble throw without really solid structure.
    chalk loving the bubbles, but your l looks a little wide. Drop a second purple splash background behind it and it would look even hotter.
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    this is it for tonight, im tired =\
     
  12. Nem

    Nem Elite Member

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    damn! i already entered the battle. unless i can pump out one more soon.

    i can see it! asma right?

    its really sick man. i cant wait for some crazy ink on that thing.

    you should try a symmetrical kinda style sometime.
     
  13. Nem

    Nem Elite Member

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  14. speak1er

    speak1er Member

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    sou-mvd, way to give this page some love
    heres mine
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  15. sex without condoms

    sex without condoms Elite Member

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    bump this sheeeeet its teh freshness
     
  16. sky_one

    sky_one Senior Member

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    nem-nice throwie
    speak1er-nice but i think you should do a little more simple
    sex without condoms-dope shit man
    Sou - Mvd-dope
     
  17. uhhh

    uhhh Elite Member

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    honestly it gets worse and worse with every picture,
    and just ends up ugly as fuck.
    the colors dont work, the throwies wack, and what are the multi colored balls?
    and why are you doing loose cross hatching with a marker?
     
  18. ninja_303_763

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  19. Nem

    Nem Elite Member

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    naw man. i realize its ridiculous. if you want the story. my lady was over and we smoked out of her brothers bong. chilled. she left. it was like 3 in the morning and i was watching this show on crop circles. and it was fascinating as hell. so i tried to draw one. and then thought it would be a sweet background for a piece. but then realized i cant piece. so i tried a throw on it. fucked it. tried to make it cool. fucked it worse and worse. and had this hilarious thing at the end. heh.
     
  20. sema

    sema Senior Member

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    mvd- feelin the style i dig the abstract shit looks alittle busy now but it should show better with an outline n some color
    nem- letters need work bubbles just buggin me out
    spk- i like it, little structure missin in "p" (think its a p) but the style pulls it off wellk it def shows ur lookin at the overall piece n not just letters
    dans-clean...
    ackers- work on structure
    little style in tryin ta develope.... ai54.photobucket.com_albums_g93_twohip4school_dtyute.jpg