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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. DemonicKronik

    DemonicKronik Senior Member

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  2. Eack

    Eack Senior Member

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  3. dark2

    dark2 Senior Member

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    i think its prety sweet i don't like the c though
     
  4. dark2

    dark2 Senior Member

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    and i didn't get any crits so ill post it again i never gave any last time so might be why but ya i went simple with it cause other wise it jus looks fucked up lol
     
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  5. Nem

    Nem Elite Member

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    are my posts invisible? shit.
     
  6. ASB_ONE

    ASB_ONE Senior Member

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    na ur post aint invisible holmes, your at a very early stage a real test of your dedication to graff. your starting out right bro wid the simple letters keep at it and u will get better.

    aint posted in ages - GUEST bsc

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  7. Drakula

    Drakula Elite Member

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    Fuck me that is sick guest.Nice structure and flow.

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    Not sure if I'm feeling this one.I might keep working at this style.Crits?
     
  8. pez ss

    pez ss Senior Member

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    eack the only thing i like is that blue line runing thou case its fairly unique ur letter ar lacking go simpler and keep em the same size scab ur c is a little wide mr tasty looking goood here sum sketches i did ai243.photobucket.com_albums_ff27_qust_zoomininpiece.jpg ai243.photobucket.com_albums_ff27_qust_focusingonthefill.jpg ai243.photobucket.com_albums_ff27_qust_blackbooksketchandcaracter.jpg
     
  9. c0ld

    c0ld Senior Member

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    ok, try to make all of your letters the same case. and dont have those spaces like that.

    i did a quick one for ya to help you out.

    heres a simple blocked one.
    [Broken External Image]:http://img511.imageshack.us/img511/1268/darkshs1.jpg
    its not too clean but it should give you the general idea. thats the direction you should be going.

    also, if i were yo, id pick a different name. im reasonably sure dark is taken and K's are just murder to do, at least for me. the way i did it was to draw out a whole alphabet, and the 3 letters that i did the best/easiest, i made a word out of them.



    attempt number 3
    [Broken External Image]:http://img254.imageshack.us/img254/8918/newsketchkq5.jpg

    sry abt how light it is. my scanner is ghey.

    should i color it?
     
  10. c0ld

    c0ld Senior Member

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    nice. keep at it.

    i really like that second one.
     
  11. larsson719

    larsson719 Senior Member

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    Didn't get any critz for it :(...
    Drakula - you started out nice with the d but then the other letters arent so good
     
  12. c0ld

    c0ld Senior Member

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    @ larsson


    very nice, except for the D.

    try opening up the hole in it, maybe?

    something abt it just isnt right.

    the style doesnt seem to match the other letters.
     
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  13. c0ld

    c0ld Senior Member

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  14. amk

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    Buuumppp Guest is hurrrrr
     
  15. kelio

    kelio Senior Member

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    Eack: i like it but i cant rly read the a.
    DemonicKronik: blocks. go to the new to graff thread its a sticky.
    GUEST: damn that delicious.
    Drakula: i like the letters maybe make the a bigger and more inline tho. and lose a couple arrows.
    pez ss: nice coloring i like it.
    larsson719: i wouldn't worry about coloring work on your letters some more. looking pretty good so far tho.

    new name "escobar" critz please :)
    and i know the bar part is bigger i had to use two diff pieces of paper and it got all un even. but whatever.
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  16. pez ss

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    bumping 4 crits i never get em geust thats the best stuff ive seen in i while on this thread keep it up drak i like the eye in the d i would make ur A bigger
     
  17. capo93

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    ai148.photobucket.com_albums_s7_mek2_2007_mekpiececardboard.jpg

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    drak- go back to what you were doing before that shit was funky
    aver- a and v need work more structure more flow
    guest- u burn me
    escobar- thicken up dem letterssssss
     
  18. capo- wow...that is sexy + sex...i dont know what that equals, but i like it
     
  19. Mr Tasty

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    painting tommrow...need crits...which one should i paint...or what should i change in the sketchs...
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  20. c0ld

    c0ld Senior Member

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