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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. Sumoe

    Sumoe Elite Member

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    Ummmm, no. Lose the arrows and work on you letters...a lot.
     
  2. hungr

    hungr Senior Member

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    to the man who writes "sake" if u plan on getting up in NYC writing sake and yer not throwing shit up as hard as sake is doing it people will recognize and u will probably catch hard beef, seeing as peeps from NYC like to beef.. u may be in another country but NYC isnt far from Montreal..and im more than positive he has shit up there, cause he has shit up in enough places.. and the fact that u said no one in the states knows sake or "canadian graff" is retarded because sake did a production with Sever and Rime who are from farther away than NYC... so i think u should change yer name, u can still rock the same style throw ups but u should probably change your name
     
  3. dark2

    dark2 Senior Member

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    cerex id make the L a bit bigger but besides that itas got potential unlike mine lol
     
  4. SOOF

    SOOF Senior Member

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    crits ? (dont bother bout the o's, i jut didnt put the o thing in, dont no why)
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  5. jersOneTIC

    jersOneTIC Senior Member

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    urban pirate - colors are coll but work on LETTERS
    cerex - it's good except for the last 2 letters..too tall
    soof - add something to the o's
    here's some shit...haven't finished yet.
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  6. dark2

    dark2 Senior Member

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  7. Akshun

    Akshun Senior Member

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    jers nice ish i dont have ne suggestions

    bump
     
  8. intaout

    intaout Senior Member

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    Urb Pirate- cool style really tech
    Cerex- simple and bubbly looks good
    Base- lose the arrows but its starting to look good
    Akshun- Silver and the Gold look good arounf it, good style, funny chin,
    Soof- pretty good
    Jers One- Thats sick i really like it
    Dark- too small




    my first attempt..crits?
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  9. Akshun

    Akshun Senior Member

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    thnx for the crits

    soof-mos def put somethin to make them look like o's work on the f and make all bars in the s the same width itd look better that way

    ark-get that outline steady and move ur letters closer together but i like the style of letters dope style
     
  10. Los

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  11. syrup2

    syrup2 Elite Member

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  12. dark2

    dark2 Senior Member

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    syrup thats sweet
    and los like syrup said lose the strips



    View attachment 481

    crits? and sorry bout it being small my web cam is retarded
     
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  13. Los

    Los Member

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    Ugh.. Someone told me to put stripes in it to see how it would look.

    Syrup, I dont know how it doesnt look like an S.
     
  14. silentchaos14

    silentchaos14 Elite Member

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    Los- id suggest u get a better name cuz S's seem hard for u. and three letter names aint the easiest to work with
    syrup- i have no idea what to say
    dark- maybe add a 3-d, use bars if u didnt
     
  15. Los

    Los Member

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    I know how to do an S.

    Slushi (Brother) told me to do that S.
     
  16. Los

    Los Member

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    Akshun- Lose some arrows.

    If you dont like my crit. Sorry but i dont know much.
     
  17. thesilentvandal

    thesilentvandal Banned

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    soof- simples
    intaout - bars
    los - LOS <--- USE those
    syrup - not bad not bad , i cant think of something to change right now tho
    akshun - simples

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  18. Eack

    Eack Senior Member

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    Very nice dawsek
     
  19. Dream Creation

    Dream Creation Senior Member

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    akshun- the force field is shit lose it! and add some flow!

    dawsex - not feelin bottom of ur s infact ur S needs lil work.

    AND WILL TOYS STOP FUCKING COMMENTING, ON SHIT THEY DONT KNOW ABOUT! JUST POST FOR THE SAKE OFF FUCKING POSTING!
     
  20. BORG

    BORG Moderator

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    gotta bump that shit, dope as hell, love thw wilds piece

    daws-d looks like an o
    akshun- fuck lookin the arrows, work on those letters, and forget about the arrows