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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. emel

    emel Senior Member

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    stumpy- cant even see the letters in that one liner... lose the arrows and dont worry too much about color right now just letters
    DIM- i really like that style but the letters are different sizes and i dont see that arrow fitting anywhere
    CYBER- those letters are dope keep it uppp
    CYTO- really like that K, maybe dont lean your letters that much to the side?:confused:


    some sorta recent stuff, im gonna paint the top one soon just not sure bout the colors

    TELL MEEEE WUTTT YUU THENNNK


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  2. Samp1e

    Samp1e Senior Member

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  3. xFatel.Onex

    xFatel.Onex Senior Member

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    yo my boy Morne in that sketch up there ^^ your R is so fucked up hahahah

    keep workin on that shit your inproving
     
  4. sevewon

    sevewon Senior Member

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  5. Samp1e

    Samp1e Senior Member

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    sev -- tone down on the fills, especially the first one. looks like someone's lunch came back up on paper :X. put more work into your letters.
     
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  6. xFatel.Onex

    xFatel.Onex Senior Member

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    ^^ lmao lunch came back up on paper haha (puke if your to stupid to figure that out)
     
  7. ---CRoR---

    ---CRoR--- Elite Member

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    yea i was just lookin at the sketch n was like my N is an eyesore...

    ill have more shit up ina few days
     
  8. sevewon

    sevewon Senior Member

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  9. sevewon

    sevewon Senior Member

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    i was actually going for the "puke" look on the first one. fuck, its a good thing someone relized what my first bomb was trying to represent
     
  10. xFatel.Onex

    xFatel.Onex Senior Member

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    some old/new ish (dont tell me to use letter structure its not my steez or my cities steez)

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  11. Nem

    Nem Elite Member

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    i love your crazy ideas. other people probably wont.

    keep em comin. crank out that weird shit.
     
  12. calculating infinity

    calculating infinity Elite Member

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  13. Dusk07

    Dusk07 Senior Member

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    dont like the first man
    but i like your throw, nice and simple and clean=]
     
  14. calculating infinity

    calculating infinity Elite Member

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  15. shred til ur dead

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    cyber- real clean good stucture i like it
    kelio- sorry bud but the only think i like at all is the top char
    phlank- im really likin it especially the first one i think the black spills kinda ruined your second one but i love the letters also, loose the arrows
    kor- make your o the same size as the other letters
    rk- i would say loose that extension on the top of your r
    calculating - i agree with dusk on your first two and i like your second two

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  16. calculating infinity

    calculating infinity Elite Member

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    to me, your m seems too spaced in the middle for the rest and the gap in the r between the head and the leg looks weird.
     
  17. silentchaos14

    silentchaos14 Elite Member

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  18. Hoostein

    Hoostein Senior Member

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    I dont really like the top part of the O, hte part that extends off of the N seems a bit large...But once again, keep practicing those R's
     
  19. Samp1e

    Samp1e Senior Member

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    silent -- those things coming out of the top of your letters? don't do em, looks bad. work on that R, don't slant your letters yet. so you know too, when you use your markers, put a piece of paper under the page you're doing so it doesn't bleed through to the next page.

    shred -- work on that M and fix that R. the right leg of the R shouldn't start under the base of the curve, it should start at the base of the curve

    infinity -- hot throws, can't say the same for the piece. keep doin your thing

    fatel -- work on the consistency of your letters, clean up your piecing too. and an FYI, there is another SOBR already out there

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    will work on later... need sleep now.
     
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  20. Mr Tasty

    Mr Tasty Banned

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    workin on new style
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