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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. sank.

    sank. Senior Member

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    hot shit el. ive alwayes loved your stuff, we should exchange..

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  2. amk

    amk Elite Member

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    ???
    lol.


    Amar.man best shit you have ever done...is that like half philly hand half throw....freakin ill.
     
  3. Hoostein

    Hoostein Senior Member

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    skeelo, thats hot. if I had to say anything it would be that the extension off the lower part of the L im not feelin so much.
    AMK, i think what you were doing before that was amazing. until that last one i thought you never erased, never seen one eraser mark on your shit, alway sooo clean.
    bigEL, I dont even have to tell you thats good. you make me feel like i suck reallly bad.
    SANK, that K is kind of lookin lik an R a bit, just my opinion although people probably wont agree with me.
    SMAE, simples. am I right?
    Micro, liking it, but for some reason the leg extending at an angle from the R doesnt look right.
     
  4. 00-made-00

    00-made-00 Elite Member

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    skello- so good fr so many reasons.
    big el- i love your charaters,different level.
    sank- smetimes i think your a sorta looks like an r maybe make the bottom bar a bit shorter.
    sume. yes you should finish it, shits fire.
    micro- i like the idea pretty kool, just keep doing tht, its the path to successes ahah.
    smae- go simple and maybe to the new to graff thread it will point you in the right direction.
    soof- looks good but prehaps make the letters a bit mre readable.
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    Sketch i did today crits?
     
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  5. dizzle_d

    dizzle_d Senior Member

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    Touiiiiiiiiii lovin the pen sketch man really feelin it!

    keep it up
     
  6. klipa

    klipa Senior Member

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    one is sorry but one needs crits.
    00-made-00= im strangly drawn to that style, the little bits on the side need to go tho keep it tidey mate, thicken up the 3rd letter just a bit, id like to see it cleaned up and coloured.

    BIGel= super cool smashing great, esp, the throwie, sicko.
     
  7. HoodRichSucka

    HoodRichSucka Elite Member

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  8. HoodRichSucka

    HoodRichSucka Elite Member

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    i really like it man. good work
     
  9. Hoostein

    Hoostein Senior Member

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    Hoodrich: not diggin the C so much, how its trying to math the E ya know? the E looks good, but maybe take a bit of that ext. off. I guess
     
  10. Robbie P

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    Hoodrich: Get rid of the extension on your E and C, they're pretty pointless. Also try to slant your A and L in the the other direction to flow better with the other letters.

    Sume: Looks pretty good, I don't know whats up the flaming book shit though.
     
  11. 00-made-00

    00-made-00 Elite Member

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    kilpa- yo man thanks, id say maybe make the S a little bit smaller and the E biger other than tht im feeling it man.
     
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  12. whahappen?

    whahappen? Elite Member

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    bottom of the c is weird and the bottom of the s is too long
    and thanks guys
    cant beleive no one picked up on the zoolander referance though:p
     
  13. Scare2

    Scare2 Senior Member

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    yo hoodrich you have the basic lettering structure going pretty good but then you added some extensions that mess the letters. (bottom of the C and E. i think your I would look better if it was streight. the right side of the L got too thin. fatten those bars up a little. i dont like the way the top part of you S goes behind itself. but i like the bottom right shape on that S. i dont like the bottom left though.maybee cut it off before it bends..? im not sure. also the P is too hidden. that was allot... but your basic letter structure is coming allong quite nicely. big improvement lately. o and i dont realy like the fanny top things on top of the s and c. but its gettin better and better keep goin. props.
     
  14. Bazer

    Bazer Moderator

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    hoodrich, the thing wit your letters is that theyre far from being as good as your handstyle. try making letters out of them. and your simples dont have to be absolutely simple...... ugh i hate when people think that. look these are simples to mayne.
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  15. alive

    alive Banned

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  16. Bazer

    Bazer Moderator

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    alive do u have a picture of a finished peice that is like..... that doesn't have the sketchy lines? i like your style but you always lay it down with those sketchy lines. =\
     
  17. scythe

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    Some new stuff, haven't been on in a while.
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    Painted piece, i have horrible can control...
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  18. alive

    alive Banned

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    go simple simple simple. and this isnt the fucking paint thread.
     
  19. Seek139

    Seek139 Senior Member

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  20. alive

    alive Banned

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