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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.
hot shit el. ive alwayes loved your stuff, we should exchange..
Amar.man best shit you have ever done...is that like half philly hand half throw....freakin ill.
skeelo, thats hot. if I had to say anything it would be that the extension off the lower part of the L im not feelin so much.
AMK, i think what you were doing before that was amazing. until that last one i thought you never erased, never seen one eraser mark on your shit, alway sooo clean.
bigEL, I dont even have to tell you thats good. you make me feel like i suck reallly bad.
SANK, that K is kind of lookin lik an R a bit, just my opinion although people probably wont agree with me.
SMAE, simples. am I right?
Micro, liking it, but for some reason the leg extending at an angle from the R doesnt look right.
skello- so good fr so many reasons.
big el- i love your charaters,different level.
sank- smetimes i think your a sorta looks like an r maybe make the bottom bar a bit shorter.
sume. yes you should finish it, shits fire.
micro- i like the idea pretty kool, just keep doing tht, its the path to successes ahah.
smae- go simple and maybe to the new to graff thread it will point you in the right direction.
soof- looks good but prehaps make the letters a bit mre readable.
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Sketch i did today crits?
Touiiiiiiiiii lovin the pen sketch man really feelin it!
keep it up
one is sorry but one needs crits.
00-made-00= im strangly drawn to that style, the little bits on the side need to go tho keep it tidey mate, thicken up the 3rd letter just a bit, id like to see it cleaned up and coloured.
BIGel= super cool smashing great, esp, the throwie, sicko.
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working on structure...kinda weak. need help
i really like it man. good work
Hoodrich: not diggin the C so much, how its trying to math the E ya know? the E looks good, but maybe take a bit of that ext. off. I guess
Hoodrich: Get rid of the extension on your E and C, they're pretty pointless. Also try to slant your A and L in the the other direction to flow better with the other letters.
Sume: Looks pretty good, I don't know whats up the flaming book shit though.
kilpa- yo man thanks, id say maybe make the S a little bit smaller and the E biger other than tht im feeling it man.
bottom of the c is weird and the bottom of the s is too long
and thanks guys
cant beleive no one picked up on the zoolander referance though
yo hoodrich you have the basic lettering structure going pretty good but then you added some extensions that mess the letters. (bottom of the C and E. i think your I would look better if it was streight. the right side of the L got too thin. fatten those bars up a little. i dont like the way the top part of you S goes behind itself. but i like the bottom right shape on that S. i dont like the bottom left though.maybee cut it off before it bends..? im not sure. also the P is too hidden. that was allot... but your basic letter structure is coming allong quite nicely. big improvement lately. o and i dont realy like the fanny top things on top of the s and c. but its gettin better and better keep goin. props.
hoodrich, the thing wit your letters is that theyre far from being as good as your handstyle. try making letters out of them. and your simples dont have to be absolutely simple...... ugh i hate when people think that. look these are simples to mayne.
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alive do u have a picture of a finished peice that is like..... that doesn't have the sketchy lines? i like your style but you always lay it down with those sketchy lines. =\
Some new stuff, haven't been on in a while.
Painted piece, i have horrible can control...
go simple simple simple. and this isnt the fucking paint thread.
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A piece over some pizza mhm...
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