Klipa - I like where your going
Jers - Coming around to some great stuff that would look really good on Freight I hope thats your surface of choice
Zeus - classic line...changed alittle lol

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seek-nice shit man, for reall!
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kp- thats hot man real clean
jers- skeez out the loop on the R a bit more.. and itll look fine..

new piece im workin on i might paint it when i get the paint.. dpends on weather i get good crits or not...(saga)

 

dial -- i suggest that you relax your letters a bit and get a better handle on them. like you've got ideas, but you need to really really really work on them, and take smaller steps.

 

dial-i think you should go a little bit more simp, i cant really see what it says. and you might want to get rid of the background or maybe tone it down a little bit might make it look better

 

sorry to bump it so far, but did anybody else notice that this is a horrible Gesus bite?

 

meh.. i wouldn't call it a direct bite... maybe inspired by... iono.. im to sleepy to tell..

here's something new i did today.. im run this style for a little bit until i can get a nice piece from it... and i need to come up with some original extensions.....

 

i just wanna know if i should complete this.

 

yo im in calgary. bayse is insane if you dont know his shit check him out on VO, voltron is killling this summer. somethin i cooked up in school today

dislike the o personally.
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EVERYONE on this page is trying way to hard. take that focus and use it to work on subtle progression, first straight letters, then curvy and flowy or clean bends with variations in bar size etc. depending on where your mind takes youwith it. then work on super duper flowyness, then extensions, and then study more i guess. then you should be where im at, still toy but studying hard.

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LOL ^ *bump*
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thats dope but dont bump stuff on the same page lol. that is tight tho

 

sir that is fuckin amazing

 

i suggest a name change there champ!
calgary bayse is alot better
no beef just advice.

calgary for life

 

^yummm

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the leg on the R wood look good if it was fatter.

 

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first sketch in awhile, its a little sketchy, the E is fucked and so is the right leg of the R but whatever.
crits?

 

I like the N just make the bottm right corner look like the top left one and it would be bettr

 

Morne get up and try something other than blockbusters. use bars, keep it basic, but try to flow a little. it seems like you figured out simples and haven't really progressed at all. you'll get there, but only if you try to push it.

Seek, your stuff is looking better and better. slowly, but still.