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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. still.alive

    still.alive Banned

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    its not obvious, just shaddup abt it. lol. looks good but pull ur letters in together.
     
  2. whahappen?

    whahappen? Elite Member

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    was the phily shit in referance to me
    haha
    why do people think my throws are philly
    they dont even resemble philly throws
     
  3. HoodRichSucka

    HoodRichSucka Elite Member

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    crits.
     
  4. uhhh

    uhhh Elite Member

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    honestly.
    youve been on this site way to long to be where you are.
    did you quit for awhile?
    or just not work on stuff?
     
  5. HoodRichSucka

    HoodRichSucka Elite Member

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    thanks...? um i mainly do handstyles and piecing isnt my thing. just been working on it lately. but appreciate it...????
     
  6. Sans

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  7. K(i)ng

    K(i)ng Senior Member

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    I like your emo kid, The color scheme is nice, and so are the bars
     
  8. HSAL

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  9. ceak.

    ceak. Member

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    hoodrich-your definately improving from what ive seen. id say pull the letters together a bit more and it would look much better.
    emokid- ive always liked your style. keep it up
    HSAL- nice man, i like what you did with the fading drips good work


    just started sketching a few days ago, trying to do some simples. really looking for crits on the blockish one but any are welcome.sorry about the size

    afarm2.static.flickr.com_1183_1346690675_753de4a8f4_b.jpg
     
    Last edited: Sep 8, 2007
  10. Dial.on

    Dial.on Senior Member

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    i got shit last on the page this was posted..crits?

    ceal- i unno man.. i think that "c" COULD look good like.. i unno though somethin about it bugs me..

    sle- the S could have some potential but i dont like how its pointy and shit.. start wit bars.. clean em up...and keep sketchin.. itll come to you..

    hoodrich- its good ur using bars but like try to make it less spaced out and less complicated... ur handies are pretty sick try doing a handy and then doing it in like bar form.. know wut im sayin...
     
  11. BORG

    BORG Moderator

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    hsal- looking good, take those ugly prong thingy's off the ends of all your letters
    ceak- you are headed in the right direction, take out the odd-ball extra extensions off all your letters, and it'd look better
    saga- sorry, i'm not feelin that, try using one thickness for now, and get your letters down solid, then go wild

    i sobered up and pumped this out for an exchange with tezer
    [Broken External Image]:http://img509.imageshack.us/img509/5598/june17002ea6.jpg
    sorry bout the r, just tried to make it look symmetrical

    and i worked on a lil more advanced c, and i have mixed feelings about it so tell me what you think
    [Broken External Image]:http://img153.imageshack.us/img153/2204/june17003zl9.jpg
     
  12. ceak.

    ceak. Member

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    those throws are sick man. im not really feeling the little tail with the half circle though, really doesnt seem to fit with the rest of the letter, just my oppinion.
     
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  13. Naysayer

    Naysayer Senior Member

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    hsal - keep it up looks good.
    ceak - keep working on it the bottom right one is my favorite but its coming along meng.
    dial on - I dont really kno how to crit you but its looks cool to me. maybe color it.
    borg- I love your shit. on the c you might try making it a little taller. But what do I know? not much rly.
     
  14. Anom- getting better, keep that shit up and fix the N and M in most of them!!!! listen to peoples crits!
     
  15. AnteUp

    AnteUp Elite Member

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    borg...holy shit thats amazing...every thing, buuut. the c's penis is kinda wack if you take it off then it lukks jus as good or better.
    saga...its diff from mostly any thing ive seen i personally like it
    anom keep it up. its nice an simple. loose tha karak tho
    sieonah-lukks great i like it..

    haha, fuckin around wit 3-d kinda wack but here goes..
    View attachment 302063
    ehh crits
     
  16. DanielDTC

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  17. AnteUp

    AnteUp Elite Member

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    no faces, no addons, no extensions...bars...please god do barss
     
  18. whahappen?

    whahappen? Elite Member

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    top is weird but the bottoms dope
    keep doing that
     
  19. Bazer

    Bazer Moderator

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    ceak you dummy. dont bump the pic right above you... *nods in disappointment.*


    cile, i like it baby but the extension on the left looks to low and to skinny. or maybe to short... iono.. play with it. =]
     
  20. Sou - Mvd

    Sou - Mvd Senior Member

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