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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. Naysayer

    Naysayer Senior Member

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    don't worry about 3d and halo (what are those wierd outlines called. I know everyone calls them forcefields but that sounds so ghey). Just work on the letters until they look descent. I cant tell what the first letter is. the e is your best letter but the weird extension on the top right leg part needs to go, keep developing the R and O.

    here is something I did for klipa.
    View attachment 302269
     
  2. thesilentvandal

    thesilentvandal Banned

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  3. BORG

    BORG Moderator

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    ayte- nice letters
    seek- can u put some color to these 3d's so i can make out whats goin on
    morne- u pretty much got it, now its time for you to drop the simps man, u been stuck on those for quite a while, try a piece with dope letters now
    klipa- the bottom of the L is covering the extension on your I

    workin on progressing my style to a more advanced look
    [Broken External Image]:http://img413.imageshack.us/img413/5891/june17007yo2.jpg

    some people need to learn to give crits btw
     
  4. sex without condoms

    sex without condoms Elite Member

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    *directed at daws
    theres no point even saying anything anymore.

    when you get your own style come back.
     
  5. Seek139

    Seek139 Senior Member

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  6. Naysayer

    Naysayer Senior Member

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    borg it looks good. I am expecially impressed with the precision you must have had to do the smaller cile bit. wow.
     
  7. Bastardo

    Bastardo Senior Member

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  8. Seek139

    Seek139 Senior Member

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    just thought you guys should know mers is a 3D god
    agraffiti.org_mers_mers9.jpg
     
  9. BORG

    BORG Moderator

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  10. AnteUp

    AnteUp Elite Member

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    seek- damn i think that the color looks worse than without...i love the without..its beeautiful. how long you bin doin 3d?
    cile-lukks peerty gud
     
  11. AZTEKA

    AZTEKA Senior Member

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  12. hellomynameisftc

    hellomynameisftc Senior Member

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  13. Sou - Mvd

    Sou - Mvd Senior Member

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    loose the rime eye in your r and make your s similar to your other letters.

    afarm2.static.flickr.com_1314_798469137_d266769052.jpg_a4f0a23c50a330cf1bf56cae6c33a893.jpg
     
  14. uhhh

    uhhh Elite Member

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    honestly.
    this stuff looks good.
    but it IS bastardos.
    usually bites come out real bad,
    but you do a good job of making this look like its yours.
    but its not, and its very very obvious.
    just look in your sig,
    the "daws" is very good and has that nice euro style, while the "ek" are decent, but nowhere near the level of the "daws"
    and by no coincidence, when you exchanged with bastardo,
    he did "daws" for you, meaning you had to come up with your own "ek" and they dont fit very well because the style isnt yours.
    youve been called out many times on this.
    really, stop. the letters arent yours and we all know it.
     
  15. Sumoe

    Sumoe Elite Member

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    Some quick, character, doodle thingy.

    afc01.deviantart.com_fs21_i_2007_252_5_b_Random_Character____by_SUMOE.jpg
     
  16. Seek139

    Seek139 Senior Member

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  17. HadeP

    HadeP Senior Member

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    thats actually a really well done D. the only thing i would work on is keeping your 3d lines straight, i dunno if they're like that on perpose, personally speaking i think it would be alot better with straight lines, but thats just me, other than that, overall really well done.
     
  18. HadeP

    HadeP Senior Member

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    looking good cile. one thing i would look at is keeping the letters generally the same size, other then that all the extentions are looking good, they're making sense, it was a good move to take out the extention on the back of the c with the half cicle bit. but yeah try and make that E just a little bit smaller, and your good to go. also, becareful not to evolve into sume's style, its looking a little influenced, not calling a bite at all. just saying it looks lke it could evolve into something similar. no beef intended.

    and i hope the "some people need to learn how to give crits"
    wasnt aimed at me.
     
    Last edited: Sep 10, 2007
  19. silentchaos14

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  20. T O K E

    T O K E Elite Member

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    morn you should try and make your lines more clean