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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. tech14

    tech14 Member

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    thanx man .... ur actually a lot of help juss for that little sentence and it inspires me to keep writing
     
  2. fonone

    fonone Senior Member

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    tech- lookin ok for starters but what i would do is get rid of the line on the bottom of the T that connects the letters, keep them sperate for now atleast, put i line/hole in the top part of your E and make it look simliar to the rest of the letters (round, not straight) and maybe put the H closer to the C, im feelin your C by the way...could be good for a throup later.

    sex without condoms- some of those throwup letters are mad man...it kind of doesnt reflect back so much in the others though...not much i can say, just keep practicin..and with that piece try and keep all the letters the same colour, size and place in the page.

    heres some of mine.


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    hey

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    hay-it says the same thing even when updside down :D

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    im not really feelin this one just thought id try something different....i hate the Y.

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    Kinda screwed the bubbles,

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    probley my fav.
     
  3. South-Pole

    South-Pole Elite Member

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    BUMP ONLY GOT ONE CRIT!!!

    some sexy stuff on this page

    sex-fucking sexy
    bawk-those handies are dope
    big-el-ill as always,always liked your stuff
    morne-

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    jack off to this ^^

    fonone-your letters needs some work,do what i said to morne and jack off to those simples for a while
     
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  4. SenTheFirst

    SenTheFirst Senior Member

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    you say its just another simple, but you cant even do it well

    im not tryin to but you down, but you cant expect to just magically get better.

    fill up a notebook or 2 with just basic letter structures and bars and you WILL get better. you just gotta put in work



    DO WORK
     
  5. tech14

    tech14 Member

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    i no i am not any good but i am not really feelin the r in mourne
     
  6. daisyface

    daisyface Senior Member

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    fonone-the first is the best, last one aint bad either. make sure to keep in mind where it looks natural to bend bars/letters
    bigel-dope shit as always im jealous of your skillz
    morne-LISTEN to people who are actually giving you good advice. ppl have repeatedly told you what to do yet you still do the same thing and complain bout it being simple. everyone starts with god damn simples and they suck but they help a shitload
     
  7. pez ss

    pez ss Senior Member

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    bumping cause of this sexy fill
     
  8. Naysayer

    Naysayer Senior Member

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    it is nice aint it.
     
  9. xFatel.Onex

    xFatel.Onex Senior Member

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    Nas i really love this this is what im talking about showing your letters more but still wild:p
    oh and if you still havent guess it says NAS hahaha:D
     
  10. whahappen?

    whahappen? Elite Member

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  12. NEZ89

    NEZ89 Senior Member

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    amk- exept for the brown the fill looks awesome and the letters are ill
    ode- don't really like the E, and u should make the letters the same size, and take the arrow off the M,
     
  13. NEZ89

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  14. Cyto Aka Son1c

    Cyto Aka Son1c Elite Member

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  15. -ShAmEE-

    -ShAmEE- Elite Member

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    is this new or. just a re bump cuz i think i seen this before.
     
  16. -Sinn-

    -Sinn- Senior Member

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  17. NEZ89

    NEZ89 Senior Member

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  18. thesilentvandal

    thesilentvandal Banned

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    south pole - you been doing simples for a long ass time, since from when i came to this site and still doing them, dont stop, youl have sick sketches like bouncing soul one day.

    whahappen - i always liked your stuff, since the day you made an account, keep it up , but, i think in your handy's there is too much stuff going on, like, idk, its just me.

    cyto aka sonic - your on the good way, continue doing simples.

    nez - bars = NEZ



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  19. whahappen?

    whahappen? Elite Member

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    thats dope and doesnt look bitten
     
  20. Sumoe

    Sumoe Elite Member

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