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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. nero122

    nero122 Elite Member

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    id go simpler on them try toning down points
     
  2. Phxbeast

    Phxbeast New Member

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    first post here. crits plz.

    normally just ghost
     
  3. TricksForKids

    TricksForKids Elite Member

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    You kids gotta start helping each other out, dont post a picture without commenting or critiquing everyone elses work or at the very least the person above you on the page...we wouldnt post our work on this site if we didnt want a reaction, and we all do, so lets help each other out a bit here eh?

    toke, youre trying to jump right into 3D, a very bad mistake, first of all, every single one of your letters is a different size, and on a different angle, sit down, and copy the letters on your keyboard, and dont connect them either.

    sex your shit keeps gettin better homie..but i hope youre being sarcastic because pencil crayons unlesss used verrrrry well, are certainly not the shit, lol, your style needs some bright vibrant colours and i hate to say it but some funky arrows and clouds and all that other euro stuff that i never understood but always loved when it was executed sexily. youre money boss keep that shit up.

    Seek i cant read that for my life and you need serious work on your handstyle, i dont really no shit about 3D so i cant exactly help you, but to me that just looks like a bob of semi-clean and straight lines, work on definining actual letters more, then again you claim youre just "experimenting", bahumbug

    Sinn, thatds not that bad man, dont worry about colour for now, also remember to keep your letters the same size, and not every letter needs to have a leg that comes down like your P, in fact, it only really works on the p for me, dont be afraid of some variation now and then

    yukon, lose the arrows and curls at each end of the piece, and use a fatter pnecil or pen to make your lines, it looks like a yellow blob, but i know theres some decent letters there somewhere

    fox and pico and phx...what the hell goes through your head when you post up something like that? i mean fuck i know everyone starts somewhere but we dont all need to see it, im dead serious when i say this, dont post another sketch on this site until you think it has SOME sort of decency to it, please, youre just wasting peoples time. go back to skethcing the letters on your keyboard for now PLEASE.
     
  4. Sans

    Sans Member

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    pico- can't read it, nothing has any sort of proportion, doesn't flow.
    fox- come up with some better letters, keep the spacing between letters even

    and both of you get rid of the arrows.

    Got some inspiration to write some new shit
    Crits?

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  5. Seek139

    Seek139 Senior Member

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    For all those looks nice ... can't read it people if you've been around you know I can do simple 3D with just my letters i guess you could say I'm coming up with my own extensions?

    I think a perfect example of my progress is the fact that I've named my 3D heros but haven't gone after a full bite or partial to get where I am if anything I should get credit for that maybe I should post some flicks from like 7months ago when I started writting "3D" graffiti. As always thanks for the crits I'm in school or I would get some more flicks up l8tz
     
  6. -ShAmEE-

    -ShAmEE- Elite Member

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    BUMP. look up to this ,
     
  7. sex without condoms

    sex without condoms Elite Member

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    Fucken Bars.

    I've gotten this question alot and the answer is yep i do.
    bars are very helpful and even though most people do agree fucking LEARN TO USE BARS.
    they are so helpful.

    here's the start of a sketch that hopefully will turn out better.
    in the end it'll be one of my favorite lines from a freestyle.
    I walk it out like crutches, two girls jump me like double dutches.

    well here's the first part, for teh uber /\/0085, notice the BARS.
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  8. pez ss

    pez ss Senior Member

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    that is some of the best shit ive seen in a while sume u have to colour that
     
  9. Bastardo

    Bastardo Senior Member

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  10. orket1

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    w.e

    little thing i drew up it ok... crits???
     

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  11. Grape1

    Grape1 Senior Member

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  12. AnteUp

    AnteUp Elite Member

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    gers- itlukks like a b
    grape-go to paint thred, this is paper,ehhh the throw on paper is decent keep workin on it
     
  13. HadeP

    HadeP Senior Member

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    i like it bastardo,
    dont be scared :) they invented erasers for a reason!!@
     
  14. whahappen?

    whahappen? Elite Member

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  15. Nem

    Nem Elite Member

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    i always make (what i think are) sick S's, and then cant follow it up.

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    only give crits if you can give me input on making it better, like "oh, tweak the top of this this way," or somethin. not just, "fuckin toy" "that sucks" etc...

    sans, if your not using bars, start. and if you are make them all the same thickness. and that last letter definitely needs to be redone. differently.
     
  16. ILuvHoodRats

    ILuvHoodRats Senior Member

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    for quoting tkid you must be fuckin crazy
    oh and on your little bitchy quote id like to add something
    go kill yourself it'll give me a break
    and at least i wont have to laugh at you
     
  17. AnteUp

    AnteUp Elite Member

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    your on the right track, but stetch out the a a little more, make it like all the other letters...you understand
     
  18. Scare2

    Scare2 Senior Member

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    nem, in terms of ur pieceing. u have nice bars and the right idea there. and it looks like ur structuring it after ur tags so the root of ur progression is ur handstyles.. its also a piece of graff thats essential. so work on your handstyles allot and keep practicing.
     
  19. HadeP

    HadeP Senior Member

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    ai172.photobucket.com_albums_w9_pphadee_iwol4.jpg
    shitty quality, my cams gone :(
    so i took it with my cell.
    umm nem, personally i dont like skinny bars to much, it leaves alot of negative space, i really like your C in the second sketch, but your bars are consistant which is obviously a good thing. not feeling the throwy, but your right about the s being the only good letter, i dont really know what to say about it to be honest, other wise i would for sure, just keep at'r i guess.
    grape that throw is balla, ink it and color?

    crits please, even tho its a shitty pic, that'd be great.
    peace
     
  20. Sumoe

    Sumoe Elite Member

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    Grape, Sex, Gers...Dopeness, my kneegrows.

    As for everybody else, work on structure, practice simples and the whole shebang.

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