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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. urbanpirate

    urbanpirate Senior Member

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    a piece for my lil brro
     
  2. Pico Hollywood

    Pico Hollywood Member

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    Rocky-shits Dope

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    I fucked up no the top arrow I ran outta room:(
     
  3. -ShAmEE-

    -ShAmEE- Elite Member

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    pico- dude simples i tell u.

    this is what happens when u aint sketch for about 2 months. is is a S.
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  4. Scare2

    Scare2 Senior Member

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    yeah pico go to the new to graph thread and work out some bars or something cuz theres a lack of letter structure. and ur 3D isnt right. and the coloring is whack. but everybody starts somewhere. bars are the place to be.

    urban pirate, go simpler.
    ur structure isnt terrible but it lacks a little. what did u use to color it. looks real wierd.


    rocky i dont really like it because of the extra bars. they dont make sense. like they just distract from the lettering in my opinion and they dont really flow with the letters. i like the structure of ur M the most. ur U shouldnt cut into itself so much. looks wierd. and the G looks wierd. the structure isnt great but its mostly the arrow thing behind it.

    shame man that is dope structure. clean that up and make a full piece. you have awsome Ssss. it is quite sketchy tho.,
     
  5. Sumoe

    Sumoe Elite Member

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    I know it's an "S" because you said it is,and it's a similar structure to mine.

    However, if neither of those things were true, I would have no idea what letter it is. Your extensions are too big and distract from the letter too much.
     
  6. Sans

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  7. -ShAmEE-

    -ShAmEE- Elite Member

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    thought that 2 sume.

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  8. asoe

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  9. South-Pole

    South-Pole Elite Member

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    ^^most of y''all should take a look in the new to graff thread

    littlerocky-llooks good
    shame-i seen you rock that S many times before+looks a bit to sumes stuff
    sans-lose those random bumps
    pico-key board letters could help you alot same for you asoe
    and same for you urbanpirate

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    last sketch in days,,im not realy liking it myself
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  10. -ShAmEE-

    -ShAmEE- Elite Member

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    need to not cover ur letter as much. and the n need to be like the TR as in the same size.

    i've bin rockin the S like that for time.

    this is a newish more simpler one.
    dont like it improve it tomorrow. or when i have time
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  11. littlerocky

    littlerocky Senior Member

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    shame not to bad but maybe loose the extensions commin off the ends of the letters that seem to wrap around...also either get rid of those bits you have on the s or carry them through the whole cuz otherwise the letters dont really match up.

    south pole space ur letters a little more and make them all the same size..but im actually kinda feelin those letters

    couple throws
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    ignore the shitty tag and the handstyle on the one the quotes kinda irrelevant.
     
  12. -ShAmEE-

    -ShAmEE- Elite Member

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    nice throwes. keep them goin for a while.

    redone. dont like it still
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  13. urbanpirate

    urbanpirate Senior Member

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    urban pirate, go simpler.
    ur structure isnt terrible but it lacks a little. what did u use to color it. looks real wierd.


    Decos
     
  14. littlerocky

    littlerocky Senior Member

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    yo man you didnt get crits cuz you didnt give any...there pricey things never come free...but loose the extensions...letter structure isnt good but isnt as bad as it could be..and backrounds mad wack.
     
  15. Bastardo

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  16. littlerocky

    littlerocky Senior Member

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    urban pirate man not you ur all good lol...dope bastardo....you wanna do a throwie exchange? <--to bastardo.
     
  17. c.n.k

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  18. sKeeLo

    sKeeLo Senior Member

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    cnk - not bad . . .letters/bars look like they get progressivley bigger . . . right side of E looks like too covered up by the B
     
  19. sank.

    sank. Senior Member

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    dont know where to post this, so ill just post it here...

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    <3 shitty pens.

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  20. syrne

    syrne Senior Member

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