Menu

Welcome!

By registering with us, you'll be able to discuss, share and private message with other members of our community.

Blackbooks

Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

Share This Page

  1. AyteYourCookies

    AyteYourCookies Senior Member

    • Messages: 158
    • Likes Received: 0
    I think you dont have any letters and you need to go simple.
     
  2. sheltr

    sheltr Senior Member

    • Messages: 263
    • Likes Received: 0
    bhaahahahaahhaha no one understands the steeez
    the 'random' lines that connect each block thing IS part of the letter..so look closer and yeah its done with pencil crayons its all i have lol and yeah the sharpie outline looks sketchy i know =/
     
  3. AyteYourCookies

    AyteYourCookies Senior Member

    • Messages: 158
    • Likes Received: 0
  4. redxdrum

    redxdrum Member

    • Messages: 42
    • Likes Received: 0
  5. Bon3s

    Bon3s Senior Member

    • Messages: 76
    • Likes Received: 1
  6. Dale92

    Dale92 Senior Member

    • Messages: 70
    • Likes Received: 0
  7. thesilentvandal

    thesilentvandal Banned

    • Messages: 428
    • Likes Received: 0
  8. Fube

    Fube Elite Member

    • Messages: 1,950
    • Likes Received: 2
    sheltr, no dude, i dont think u understand the steeez. gotta get basic before u get wild.

    thesilentvandal im glad u came to your senses and are actually doing some of your own shit with "bastardo" influence. good shit.
     
    Last edited: Sep 24, 2007
  9. sheltr

    sheltr Senior Member

    • Messages: 263
    • Likes Received: 0
  10. Fube

    Fube Elite Member

    • Messages: 1,950
    • Likes Received: 2
    yes but your letters look like shit, not gunna coat it with some sugar man. everyone has "gone simple". the only difference between them and u is u didnt stay simple long enough to have any form of structure in your work. theres only one thing to say, u cant just think "ok, ive done simples enough now i bet i can do some wild shit."

    "i find that hellishly annoying" that u dont listen to crits. sure its a wide statement. but its fuckin true so get used to it when u post bs like that again.

    -btw, im feelin the crack!
     
  11. thesilentvandal

    thesilentvandal Banned

    • Messages: 428
    • Likes Received: 0
    listen to fube and do simples like i do them !
     
  12. Scare2

    Scare2 Senior Member

    • Messages: 156
    • Likes Received: 0
    ^^he was making fun of you saying mad shit is bbittin but anyway.
    kinda was


    daws why the fuck didnt you do ur own shit years agO? uv got so much talent. all ur new stuff is hella good. keep doin it.


    sheltr im not sure if urs was that big blob of brown shit on the last page with no letters. no structure. and no anything. but if fube is sayin go simple. do. it sounds gay. it may not be as fun. but u cannot write if you cant simple. a simple like daws's ^^^ is way cooler than a wild from someone who cant rock good letter structure. its just whack. you get to a pretty fun progression too eventually.
    (when youve gone simple.. do you mean for a couple sketches, or a couple months?) the second is simple.

    bones give real crits. but i like it its creative, distinct style. but the simple not colored one above it is better. learn your structure better before changing it all up.


    havnt posted in a while.
    this is what happens in boring classes.
    ai201.photobucket.com_albums_aa170_iancarroll7_P9240046.jpg
    ai201.photobucket.com_albums_aa170_iancarroll7_P9240041.jpg
    ai201.photobucket.com_albums_aa170_iancarroll7_P9240040.jpg
    ai201.photobucket.com_albums_aa170_iancarroll7_P9240047.jpg

    and i decided that i needed to learn upper case Es. because theyv allways been a bitch for me. so i did a couple different bites and the bottom one is what i finally turned out of it. im happy with it.

    bite
    ai201.photobucket.com_albums_aa170_iancarroll7_P9240044.jpg

    not bite
    god bless crayola markers. ahaha.
    ai201.photobucket.com_albums_aa170_iancarroll7_P9240045a.jpg




    and this has some heavy influence in some parts. and im coloring it right now..
    ai201.photobucket.com_albums_aa170_iancarroll7_P9240048.jpg
     
    Last edited: Sep 24, 2007
  13. CodeSix

    CodeSix Member

    • Messages: 31
    • Likes Received: 0
  14. Scare2

    Scare2 Senior Member

    • Messages: 156
    • Likes Received: 0
    code six get a better camera or wutev. or just dont shake ur hand so much...?
    but make sure ur spacing is equal (F) and letters are same size ish.
    i like second one more. and on the I? see how the top line kinda flows directly into the top line of the y.. make it curve down to seperate that letter cuz it looks wierd right now. look at other peoples work. like their throwies.. check some common styles and learn wut looks right. just keep practicing.


    colored it with two dying crayola markers from school and a red marksallot.
    quality.

    ai201.photobucket.com_albums_aa170_iancarroll7_P9240049.jpg
     
    Last edited: Sep 24, 2007
  15. AnteUp

    AnteUp Elite Member

    • Messages: 1,484
    • Likes Received: 0
    wow...thats really good imo, jus get rid of the extension between the bottom of the s, not the thick one...the hair like one
     
  16. SenTheFirst

    SenTheFirst Senior Member

    • Messages: 249
    • Likes Received: 0
    damn dude thats nice. your progress is sick. props

    daws, you no longer kill everything on the page.
     
  17. Samp1e

    Samp1e Senior Member

    • Messages: 246
    • Likes Received: 0
    Last edited: Sep 25, 2007
  18. BORG

    BORG Moderator

    • Messages: 2,169
    • Likes Received: 2
    ^^^damn sample, the color really brings it to life

    daws- how ignorant to think ur the best on the page, the simps are decent at best, lower that ego a bit

    scare looking fresh as hell, keep it up
     
  19. Naysayer

    Naysayer Senior Member

    • Messages: 137
    • Likes Received: 0
    scare and sample. That is amazing and clean. I am jealous of your skills.

    quick pen freestyle simple.

    View attachment 305557

    and I dont write rain. its just a random word.