sank, i rekon thats really nice scare2, really clean man, dope shit swavey, i prefer ure second sketch as the other one was too blocklike- straight kinda yeah lol anteup, sometimes takes me a while to figure the letters out but i love it, love ure style heres some stuff ive done, just sketching n shit these are the letters i initially used, bars of course heres and experimental piece, ddnt turn out the way i wanted but some progress and heres my best sketch so far which i did today but i havent added 3d or colour yet, kinda afraid in case i fuck it up lol heres a experimental throwie, throw thread isnt recent enough crits plz
swavey, i like that amor, lose the arrows.. ok, i got some new shit.. THIS IS MY FIRST ATTEMPT AT COLOURING OLD-SCHOOL. so yeah, flame away. http://xs119.xs.to/xs119/07393/IMG_0299.jpg and theres this thing..pretty crappy http://xs119.xs.to/xs119/07393/IMG_0300.jpg and this is one that i actually really like http://xs119.xs.to/xs119/07393/IMG_0301.jpg and then there is this one...crap http://xs119.xs.to/xs119/07393/IMG_0302.jpg so ya, that's it. CRITS PLEASE.
th one that you like and the oldskool one have potenetial, i would suggest drop all your markers and colours for a bit longer and just practice simple letter structer, also lose all 3d, shadows and extras all you need are biro sketches of letters, (oh yea lose the dimonds on the top of the dope sketch)
[Broken External Image]:http://i180.photobucket.com/albums/x159/vampireboy65/DSCI0117-1.jpg last night i was sketching my s and trying to mix it up a littel bit of k.Kritsplz
lordloss. go simpler. the only ones that have any potential is the middle one that says something like "wak on" by it. and the bottom right hand corner one. kors. your 3d is off in a lot of places. you are using bars but I am not really feeling it in my opinion you should go simpler but maybe others have a different view.
[Broken External Image]:http://i180.photobucket.com/albums/x159/vampireboy65/DSCI0117-2.jpg just did these ion like 5 mins crits??
chew i like the letters on the first and 3rd not so much the coloring in on the first but i think you can make it good and the third one is good. just work on the 3d a bit but besides that it goodgood job
i aint callin bite but take a close look at that second last pic its lookin mighty farmiliar way more horrible quality and insults the dude who crated it tho View attachment 305883 crits?