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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. EsKoNeR!!

    EsKoNeR!! Elite Member

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    first decent outline ive done for a while. pretty stoked on it
    gunna try to make it a fullpage
    ai61.photobucket.com_albums_h58_Eskoner_Photo5.jpg
     
  2. EsKoNeR!!

    EsKoNeR!! Elite Member

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    i fucked up the fill bad on that. no good
     
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  3. lord patrick

    lord patrick Senior Member

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    hello everybody, im borrowing pats account to try and get crits
    i know im no good but one can only hope for the best
     

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  4. Naysayer

    Naysayer Senior Member

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    it looks good. but there is someone on this forum thats writes hungr. so you better watch out for that.
     
  5. huskinator

    huskinator Senior Member

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  6. Mello

    Mello Senior Member

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    yea like Naysayer said, someone here writes hungr =/

    husk - lookin good mate, the D is a bit hard to read, but still, flows nicely :)

    [Broken External Image]:http://img527.imageshack.us/img527/2630/melo7ma1.jpg

    I fucked up the shadow, so theres a shot of it before the shadow too.
     
  7. Game905

    Game905 Senior Member

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    you can see the d fine
     
  8. Bon3s

    Bon3s Senior Member

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  9. Code

    Code Senior Member

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    Bon3- actually my faverite one out of all those sketches is the pen one with the drop shadow, it has decent letter structure, but the H doesent seem to work with the rest of all those letters

    Mello- I am in love with your O and the flow is decent but the M to me seems a bit to thick

    Bouncing: That is so dope

    Esk: Complete and total fire

    K here is mine

    [Broken External Image]:http://img299.imageshack.us/img299/1006/scan0002gc7zp4.jpg

    I am still trying to find another letter that can flow the same way i am trying to get it to flow.
     
  10. brunorod

    brunorod Member

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    bouncingsoul- I dig your stile man, great sketch. Just clean it up a bit.
    EsKoNeR- Cool sketch dude. Does it say Estu? I can't really read it.
    Mello- It's a good start but I'd try to get a better letter structure, try to bend your bars different ways until you find something you like.
    huskinator- Good letter structure dude but I don't like the stars and hearts.
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    Alright, so I've been working on my letter structure (specially on my Ks) during math class here's one I like:
    [Broken External Image]:http://i36.photobucket.com/albums/e38/brunorod/PencilK.jpg

    Please give crits, I don't care if you say it's bullshit but also tell me how to get better, I wanna improve.
     
  11. Code

    Code Senior Member

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    k, dud since i guess you forgot about me :( i will still give you a crit

    First dud i actually would probally like it if it were not at an angle like that, second lose the extensions on the bottom and top of you first bar.
     
  12. enigmatic

    enigmatic Senior Member

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    nothing on this page looks super toy at all.

    good job everyone whose posted. especiallly bouncing and the guy after him.

    View attachment 307269


    says jen. girl. 15 min.
     
  13. dim

    dim Elite Member

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  14. exhale

    exhale Senior Member

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    stuck - u looks squished, try not to overlap 3d
    enigmatic - maybe make the n 's legs farther apart
    bruno - um shorten the top of the k's extension and try not to curve all the extensions?
    code - the c and n don't look the same to me. and the c's top extension looks out of place.
    bon3s - not feelin the red and yellow one 2nd simple from the first pic.
    melo - l's leg seems a bit fat and the o seems like it's trying to get squished in
    huskinator - swald? i like it but the s's bottom part seems a bit fat compared to other letters?
    ungr - um on the first one the g circle seems out of place and on the second one, the n looks too thin
    dimr - i like but it looks shakey? like on the i but maybe that's just the colouring.
     
  15. thesilentvandal

    thesilentvandal Banned

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  16. dim

    dim Elite Member

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    daws everything is good but the top bar on the d is to skinny im not sure if u were trying to go for that or not but over all it looks good
     
  17. whahappen?

    whahappen? Elite Member

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    do this, not the thing you posted
     
  18. pez ss

    pez ss Senior Member

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    skelo looking dope ass hell there but i think it would look more like one piece and not like three in a row if u did that same colours but all in one letter with all the letters if u get what im saying
    husk looks kinda like graff creator but i could be wrong
    BUMPIN FOR SOME CRITS
     
  19. Demiurge

    Demiurge Member

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    Fucking nice.
     
  20. bouncingsoul

    bouncingsoul Elite Member

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