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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. Fube

    Fube Elite Member

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    View attachment 308466

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    practice. love or hate welcome.

    nars- fix your s, some of them look like e's. looks like u work hard on your fills, i think it looks good man, but hit some more simples like mine. u will be amazed on how much u progress.

    calo- its ok, just about the same crits as nars, u know what? u all need to keep at the simples, im mean do what u wanna do, u dont have to just do simples.
     
  2. BORG

    BORG Moderator

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    fube-go for the bottom one, not feelin the top throw as much as your others

    nars- i am not feelin much of your letters, fills, bg, ect. look good, but work on your lettering
     
  3. NaRsyONE*

    NaRsyONE* Senior Member

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    thanks for crits
    KUNTA:yeah i might start doing some of that simple stuff yours clean imma try it out soon
    ACES ONE:thanks for pointing that out lol im still getting used to this shit
     
  4. Apoc Dozer

    Apoc Dozer Senior Member

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  5. silentchaos14

    silentchaos14 Elite Member

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    yeah u kinda lost yur curve after the first letter. try just doing two horizontal lines across yur page and following those and eventually take them out and it should help. it helped me alot.
     
  6. Roolete

    Roolete Elite Member

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  7. silentchaos14

    silentchaos14 Elite Member

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  8. lordloss

    lordloss Senior Member

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    ace- i like it just try to go simpler and a lot bigger
    narsy- i love it keep going
    kunta-the first one is alright but i really dont like the second one for some reason just keep sketching you will get it.
    verm-i love it its clean flows nice job
    cher-3d is a bit off but letters are nice just try to make them a bit smaller
    zen- you are getting better each time i see it keep working
    i will have some pics up in a bit when i get time
     
  9. TricksForKids

    TricksForKids Elite Member

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    AW you guys are all getting along and being nice and constructive and actually producing some decent shit

    fube i personally like the first one more, dont feel like you need to simplify your shit, thats you, you know? keep fucking with the first one, the k's just a little off, i can see what youre going for but you didnt hit it

    narsy, shits fresh, but alot of its colouring, you got a cool old school/new school euro fusion going on, keep it up, dont be afraid to remember its a PIECE, so not only does each letter have to be good, but they all have to go together

    apoc and roulette, nice simples, fix your R roulette, you got lazy on it, the C and E are nice and simple though, thats awesome that you guys are starting out the proper way

    as for everyone else on this page, i can only say the same thing i always say, go simple or go choke on a bean sprout and stop posting your junk that you KNOW is junk, people cant TEACH you graffiti, it takes a little fucking ceativity
     
  10. Aces One

    Aces One Senior Member

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    Zen - Nice n simple....MMM FRESH
    Cher - simple too, but your C seems to small.
     
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  11. Chalk

    Chalk Senior Member

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    how come no one told you not to write sake?

    don't write sake

    afarm2.static.flickr.com_1361_1402040745_b03001f5dc_o.png
     
  12. Aces One

    Aces One Senior Member

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    its for my friend
     
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  13. skoe

    skoe Senior Member

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    just try this if theirs a person out their writing ur name thats better than u then just change ur name thats like writing saber but u live in europe
     
  14. librelikespie

    librelikespie Senior Member

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    crits for all in general, I cant say shit about ur letters n stuff, if you like the way they look, roll with it. You dont wanna be stuck getting up with a shitty style that u hate and just cant get to flow. But i have to say, at least have ur stuff looking half decent, know what I mean? If people say eg. "loose the tail on ur e, it looks wack" but you actually like the way it looks, keep it, its just one persons opinion. but if you get swamped over by people that hate your shit, improve!

    sketches from school today...
    ai160.photobucket.com_albums_t175_mud_aura_img017.jpg

    This one has faces in the shape of the letters above.
    ai160.photobucket.com_albums_t175_mud_aura_img016.jpg
     
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  15. Seti

    Seti Elite Member

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    wagwan, aint been on here for time, heres a couple new sketches an a life drawing.....

    ai18.photobucket.com_albums_b144_nightbreedkru_Image126.jpg
    ai18.photobucket.com_albums_b144_nightbreedkru_insnew2.jpg
    ai18.photobucket.com_albums_b144_nightbreedkru_Untitled_1_1.jpg
     
  16. Bazer

    Bazer Moderator

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    hahaa everyone in the last page called you kunta
    *_*
    i'd say go with the first one though... the 2nd one.. eeehh.. ;/
     
  17. South-Pole

    South-Pole Elite Member

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    libre those characts look dope,and that first sketch is niiiiice
    nars your fills are better than your letters,for me letters should be better than the fill,so that means try doing simples for a while
    Ace change your name if theres already a Sake getting up in your area
    or else try working on those simple cause your E is the only decent letter yet
    fube-that funta throwie is ok,not feeling the k though
    silent-you got better,got straigther lines,looks more clean but non the less
    you still need more work and loose those extensions on those letters man

    whoaa haven't posted shit here in a while,keep getting better and better
    i don't have much time to find my cam,so i only scanned this unfinished outline,whoa can't even remember the last time i wrote my whole name

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    more shit comming,just don't have enough time to post them
     
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  18. librelikespie

    librelikespie Senior Member

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    seti- wtf u doin in the toy forum :D
    south pole- now thats sick! no need for a fancy fill, the letters alone look nice!
     
  19. AyteYourCookies

    AyteYourCookies Senior Member

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  20. whahappen?

    whahappen? Elite Member

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