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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. *Wing*

    *Wing* Senior Member

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    Looking good considered that you didn't use bars!
     
  2. JEDI-MASTER

    JEDI-MASTER Elite Member

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    yea i like dis alot the E was original, but that extra hook in d amiddle wasnt needed, kinda made it look like an S at first with extenisoions just seemd a lil off but the rest of the piece was perfect, rest of letters bang on,i liked the color selection and the attetion to detail spent alot of time lookin at this shit look forward to cn more nig
     
  3. StAtiK1

    StAtiK1 Senior Member

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  4. "Riot"

    "Riot" Elite Member

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  5. sex without condoms

    sex without condoms Elite Member

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    im hoping that was direrected at neuro
     
  6. StAtiK1

    StAtiK1 Senior Member

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    you could have just gave me a crit but whatever... lol
     
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  7. amk

    amk Elite Member

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    because yours is the opposite of dope.
    its whack.

    " harsh crits are the way forward "
     
  8. "Riot"

    "Riot" Elite Member

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    haha it was.
     
  9. StAtiK1

    StAtiK1 Senior Member

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    thats not a crit thats just an insult and it doesnt really help.. lol
     
  10. amk

    amk Elite Member

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    it is a crit because im saying its whack....thus being a crit...duuuh
    anyways..

    i dont know really wha to say...its really bad...just do simples....im sure youv been told already...so why dont you do them...or youll stay whack forever...and whenever you post..people will say

    " thats dope "

    youll be like

    " uh yeah man i know "

    then theyll be like..

    " i was onabout Amk "

    and youlll be like..

    " uh uuuh...ugh....i need to do simples just like everyone has told me too "

    peace.
     
  11. StAtiK1

    StAtiK1 Senior Member

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    uhm ya i do simples this is basically the only thing iv ever done that really hasnt been, plus its not even that far away from a simple. just experimenting i guess, all you had to say was u should stick to simpler things...
     
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  12. amk

    amk Elite Member

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    aight man.
    youll progress
     
  13. .D.H.

    .D.H. Senior Member

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    here statik: lose those curls coming of the end of the t's. your drop is slightly off in some places. at the bottom of the t's, its too 'pointy'. i prefer to square things off and try to avoid sharp edges, but that may just be a personal habit. make the bars in you letter more rectangular.

    roolete: word, i get ya. it happens
     
  14. in_the_red

    in_the_red Senior Member

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    N.O.T.E. - Not bad, although I can tell it's a little rushed. The thicker outline around the edges of the letters should be around the bottom as well. Lose the arrows, they just don't work. Your shading isn't that great and your bubble background thing should be under all the letters. The letters look okay though. The curl in the A looks good, but not the one in the E, you can tell it's rushed haha. Keep it a bit simpler - only use extensions if they're going to add something nice to the piece. Hope that helps.

    Statik1, that looks like my title pages in my exercise books from primary school haha. Do simples, make your letters as basic as possible, and don't put underlining lines, and silly curls on letters. Keep your letters the same size. Hopefully that was more helpful than what Amk said, but he's right though, it's pretty whack.
     
  15. crimateNC

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  16. LikeOner

    LikeOner Senior Member

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    I actually don't think this looks that bad, just take the curls off the T's, they don't look right, and make the bottom of the T's straighter in my opinion.
     
  17. mas$

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    [Broken External Image]:http://img87.imageshack.us/img87/1537/pic035tg4.jpg
    some new ish..well one pic
    tried paintin it on the basketball court floor, but between the floor suckin up paint, runnin outta white and my likes gettin fucked cus its horizontal it kinda fucked analy
     
  18. From the Ground Up

    From the Ground Up Senior Member

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    why the fuck would you paint the ground???
     
  19. mas$

    mas$ Elite Member

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    cus ther where no walls around that arent peoples houses :p
    and i thought it wud be fun haha
     
  20. in_the_red

    in_the_red Senior Member

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    Mass, too many little extensions and things. I guess the letters aren't too bad though.

    Crimate, work on making your letters the same size. There's too many extensions, make it simpler. The letters are okay, but damn, work on that tag!