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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.
Looking good considered that you didn't use bars!
yea i like dis alot the E was original, but that extra hook in d amiddle wasnt needed, kinda made it look like an S at first with extenisoions just seemd a lil off but the rest of the piece was perfect, rest of letters bang on,i liked the color selection and the attetion to detail spent alot of time lookin at this shit look forward to cn more nig
n.o.t.e - not bad, it looks like you might of tried to go a bit more complicated than your ready for but thats just me.
drew this in class after we had a test cause i was bored, i had to go over it again at home though cause the pencil was to light crits?
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im hoping that was direrected at neuro
you could have just gave me a crit but whatever... lol
because yours is the opposite of dope.
" harsh crits are the way forward "
haha it was.
thats not a crit thats just an insult and it doesnt really help.. lol
it is a crit because im saying its whack....thus being a crit...duuuh
i dont know really wha to say...its really bad...just do simples....im sure youv been told already...so why dont you do them...or youll stay whack forever...and whenever you post..people will say
" thats dope "
youll be like
" uh yeah man i know "
then theyll be like..
" i was onabout Amk "
and youlll be like..
" uh uuuh...ugh....i need to do simples just like everyone has told me too "
uhm ya i do simples this is basically the only thing iv ever done that really hasnt been, plus its not even that far away from a simple. just experimenting i guess, all you had to say was u should stick to simpler things...
here statik: lose those curls coming of the end of the t's. your drop is slightly off in some places. at the bottom of the t's, its too 'pointy'. i prefer to square things off and try to avoid sharp edges, but that may just be a personal habit. make the bars in you letter more rectangular.
roolete: word, i get ya. it happens
N.O.T.E. - Not bad, although I can tell it's a little rushed. The thicker outline around the edges of the letters should be around the bottom as well. Lose the arrows, they just don't work. Your shading isn't that great and your bubble background thing should be under all the letters. The letters look okay though. The curl in the A looks good, but not the one in the E, you can tell it's rushed haha. Keep it a bit simpler - only use extensions if they're going to add something nice to the piece. Hope that helps.
Statik1, that looks like my title pages in my exercise books from primary school haha. Do simples, make your letters as basic as possible, and don't put underlining lines, and silly curls on letters. Keep your letters the same size. Hopefully that was more helpful than what Amk said, but he's right though, it's pretty whack.
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I've been practicing the bars and stuff. crits plz
I actually don't think this looks that bad, just take the curls off the T's, they don't look right, and make the bottom of the T's straighter in my opinion.
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some new ish..well one pic
tried paintin it on the basketball court floor, but between the floor suckin up paint, runnin outta white and my likes gettin fucked cus its horizontal it kinda fucked analy
why the fuck would you paint the ground???
cus ther where no walls around that arent peoples houses
and i thought it wud be fun haha
Mass, too many little extensions and things. I guess the letters aren't too bad though.
Crimate, work on making your letters the same size. There's too many extensions, make it simpler. The letters are okay, but damn, work on that tag!
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