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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. mas$

    mas$ Elite Member

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    yea i kinda went wild on that one..i did one with the addons and ish toned down, looked better...i swear dubai really needs a legal wall so i can practice painting without havin to watch my back for people gna report me..otherwise ima be stuck doin posters and slaps for ever..
     
  2. StAtiK1

    StAtiK1 Senior Member

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    d.h., note and likeoner thanks for the advise, im aware of most of it. after i drew it i was like the curls on the T's and the underline is kinda gay, but whatever its practice:p lol
     
  3. librelikespie

    librelikespie Senior Member

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    mass - i actually kinda like that piece, i reckon it would look sick on a wall instead of the ground :D

    heres sum diarrhoea from me:
    ai160.photobucket.com_albums_t175_mud_aura_img031.jpg
     
  4. Eack

    Eack Senior Member

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  5. in_the_red

    in_the_red Senior Member

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    librelikespie, those are looking pretty good. Are they supposed to slope down on the right like that? They might look good just going straight across.

    Eack, you should give crits if you expect to get them. Lose the arrows, they look silly. Try making your letters fatter and you should probably go simpler.
     
  6. librelikespie

    librelikespie Senior Member

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    Eack - overall, that ish is tight! But in my opinion, those extensions are kinda wack and the letters could use some work, but style is good and colour scheme is good, I like it.

    inthered - lol no they arent supposed to slope down, my scanner kinda did that, stupid piece of shit scanner :D
     
  7. Bastardo

    Bastardo Senior Member

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  8. Eack

    Eack Senior Member

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    last time i gave crits everybody complained "cuz they where not right" so im simply avoiding beef
     
  9. in_the_red

    in_the_red Senior Member

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    Crits can't be 'not right' but I understand if you don't feel ready to give them. Just mention that before you post a pic :)
     
  10. librelikespie

    librelikespie Senior Member

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    bastardo - tight sheeyet. im diggin that red box with the lines going thro... oh wait? hehe .... those throws are awesome, i dont see any problems.
     
  11. Eack

    Eack Senior Member

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    btw bastardo i love that style...i really like your tags 2...
    im still tryin 2 find myself a style :p
     
  12. BombingSciences Bitch

    BombingSciences Bitch Senior Member

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  13. .D.H.

    .D.H. Senior Member

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    this could be a cool style if you had better structure and it wasnt so damn sloppy. get you letters down better and come back to this, there is some potential
     
  14. *Wing*

    *Wing* Senior Member

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  15. Hoostein

    Hoostein Senior Member

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    it gets thicker throughout the entire thing. dont do that. keep letters the same width. I think that kind of I (and also the O that matches it) are so played out. the n to G connection is too big in y opinion. there. stop bumping it. i l
     
  16. BORG

    BORG Moderator

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  17. glyce

    glyce Senior Member

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    ai22.photobucket.com_albums_b320_grungrocker_Picture005.jpg
    i think this ones a lot better then my last, any crits?
     
  18. librelikespie

    librelikespie Senior Member

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    borg and glyce - nice n clean!

    tried to make it cleaner, fukin markers bled :D

    Failure:
    ai160.photobucket.com_albums_t175_mud_aura_img032.jpg
     
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  19. in_the_red

    in_the_red Senior Member

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    Glyce, that looks almost exactly the same as the last one. The S needs to be fatter in the middle part. Lose the movement lines around the outside. Your tag needs work too.
     
  20. thesilentvandal

    thesilentvandal Banned

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