yea i kinda went wild on that one..i did one with the addons and ish toned down, looked better...i swear dubai really needs a legal wall so i can practice painting without havin to watch my back for people gna report me..otherwise ima be stuck doin posters and slaps for ever..
d.h., note and likeoner thanks for the advise, im aware of most of it. after i drew it i was like the curls on the T's and the underline is kinda gay, but whatever its practice lol
mass - i actually kinda like that piece, i reckon it would look sick on a wall instead of the ground heres sum diarrhoea from me:
librelikespie, those are looking pretty good. Are they supposed to slope down on the right like that? They might look good just going straight across. Eack, you should give crits if you expect to get them. Lose the arrows, they look silly. Try making your letters fatter and you should probably go simpler.
Eack - overall, that ish is tight! But in my opinion, those extensions are kinda wack and the letters could use some work, but style is good and colour scheme is good, I like it. inthered - lol no they arent supposed to slope down, my scanner kinda did that, stupid piece of shit scanner
[Broken External Image]:http://img138.imageshack.us/img138/8381/picture280253ca1.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img91.imageshack.us/img91/9682/picture280258rc4.jpg Eack at first that looked okay, but at closer look the letter need alot of work, steer away from fancy fills because that drags away from the letters, stick to simple letters using bars, and come back to fills when you have better letter structure.
Crits can't be 'not right' but I understand if you don't feel ready to give them. Just mention that before you post a pic
bastardo - tight sheeyet. im diggin that red box with the lines going thro... oh wait? hehe .... those throws are awesome, i dont see any problems.
this could be a cool style if you had better structure and it wasnt so damn sloppy. get you letters down better and come back to this, there is some potential
it gets thicker throughout the entire thing. dont do that. keep letters the same width. I think that kind of I (and also the O that matches it) are so played out. the n to G connection is too big in y opinion. there. stop bumping it. i l
[Broken External Image]:http://img148.imageshack.us/img148/5557/dscf2667zp4.jpg- quickie Wing- go way simpler, its not terrible, uses same letter widths and heights and work on the flow of letters for now
Glyce, that looks almost exactly the same as the last one. The S needs to be fatter in the middle part. Lose the movement lines around the outside. Your tag needs work too.
View attachment 309654 View attachment 309655 View attachment 309656 the s in the 2 last sketches are gay