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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. BIGel

    BIGel Elite Member

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    havent checked in here in awhile but im glad to see so many older faces still around and getting better. props to borg for the sticker pack, the bottom flick is his pack

    hepos' book.

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    detail shot.
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    airbrush on glass..
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    my homie suer did this for me.
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  2. in_the_red

    in_the_red Senior Member

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    Borg, it looks like your tag needs a lot of work.

    Krime, just keep practicing. Keep your letters on the same level and the same size.

    Jroc, lose the extensions. As everyone has told you many times, keep it simple. The O is terrible, it needs to be the same size as the other letters. Actually all the letters are pretty terrible.

    Bigel, I love the way you did the shadows, with the thin black lines.
     
  3. Apoc Dozer

    Apoc Dozer Senior Member

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    [Broken External Image]:http://img147.imageshack.us/img147/2825/ssssssssssssssssssstt2.jpg

    Just Keep M Simple until you fix all letters all perfect then do add-on/style shit

    O too small already said, just make letters same side

    With your R just lose the add-on again, and make the curved bar on the R same thickness throughout whole bar

    With N same with R, keep the bars the same size and thickness and lose add-ons

    E just keep same thickness with bars, lose add-ons but also keep space between top bar of E same space between the Middle bar of the E as the bottom bar of the E

    E<-- See same space between top part of E and bottom part

    This my advice, I'm obviously not one to talk, but I'm pretty sure I know the basic of drawing simple letters, take it or leave it,

    don't take this as offense, I'm just trying to help you out, most people just say one little thing about your simple if that, hope this helps
     
  4. Voze

    Voze Senior Member

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    i swear you're never ever gonna progress if all you sketch is sloppy 3 second throws and do your pieces with a ruler. you got style but try takin it in a direction more... forward
     
  5. dim

    dim Elite Member

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    BIGEL- good to see u back, and you came back with a bang. im really feeling those chracters, they are truly great.
     
  6. daisyface

    daisyface Senior Member

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    sex-lets see some finished stuff!
    borg-im thinking maybe the extensions are too small and they make the letters look too bulky
    jroc-ehhhh I dont know why you insist on doing weird add on things
    bigel- dope shit, the airbrushed glass gives a good effect
    bluesteel- you got a pretty decent style, just looks a lil sloppy with the lines, maybe its the pic quality i dont know

    ok i havent posted in a long time...writers block is a bitch


    [Broken External Image]:http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v322/torrie_nilla/graff/um005.jpgquit before i was done

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    [Broken External Image]:http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v322/torrie_nilla/graff/um007.jpghome grown yeeeehaw
     
  7. 00-made-00

    00-made-00 Elite Member

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    Daisy: its good defo going in the right directon.
    Bluesteel: i like your letters they lok kool, maybe try spaceing them out a bit, other than that there hot hot hot.
    bigel: im in love with the glass i want one of them, and the heps sketch is sweet as especially the E.
    Havent posted in baressss but i got a flicky. Scanner fucked it up, id fight it but im prettysure id lose.
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    i <3 simples
     
  8. Jet

    Jet Elite Member

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    then please go back to doing keyboard letters.
     
  9. amk

    amk Elite Member

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    ahah Voze up in this bitch
    sup mannnnnn
    gerron MSN geez

    Ultra...aint bad...the R is pretty bad tho....not really bad but isnt up to pare with the other letters...its pretty generic id say bit still nicely done and clean..
     
  10. undergroundanimal

    undergroundanimal Senior Member

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    borg: really like the extensions man.. good job
    bigel:love those sketches and the airbrush aswell..
    bluesteel:it`s really sloppy but i think it would look nice if you just take your time,and make the 1st and last letter more similair..
    daisyface:really like your 4th sketch..

    not finished yet butt can anybody give me some crits on my design/letterstructure...
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  11. Fluffy Bunnies

    Fluffy Bunnies Elite Member

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  12. 00-made-00

    00-made-00 Elite Member

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    jey- listen the scan does it no justice man ill get a better pic, its funny your the only perso who thinks that even amk said to me what the fuck is jet talkin about, the only thing i agree on is the bubble i shouldnt of put them on.

    Fluffy: feeling that style man i like it.
    Easy: im feeling that i think its sik, so stick with it.
     
  13. Jet

    Jet Elite Member

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    Toui I checked out your shit in the Progression thread and you can't honestly say that the shit on top of the page here is as good as that stuff.

    to make it better you should try to make all the letters even, the "I" is awkwardly sticking out on top.

    also the 3D on the dot of the I is way off compared to the rest of the letters, pick a vanishing point and stick to it.

    and just straighten out your force field, it's angled in places that it should be straight, like below the "I" and "U"
     
  14. 00-made-00

    00-made-00 Elite Member

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    ok man no beef homie?
    to be honest recently my letters just dont fit for some reason i dunno its weird. it will sort its self out i hope. xx
     
  15. Messer

    Messer Senior Member

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  16. eMJayBee

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  17. Messer

    Messer Senior Member

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    thats it HOOTTT^^^
    haha i know my structure neeedddssss woorrrkkkkk hahaha...but i got the block at the moment so im just trying to bash out whatever i can do.......any body got any advice on whats going wrong with my structure??.....
    [heres some older peices from like 2-3 months ago]
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  18. sex without condoms

    sex without condoms Elite Member

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  19. Fluffy Bunnies

    Fluffy Bunnies Elite Member

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    I am not feelin any of those mang
     
  20. mum

    mum Member

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