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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. silentchaos14

    silentchaos14 Elite Member

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    ante-all of them except the 1st one look sick, maybe if u cleaned the first one up more it would look good.
    renz- the colours kinda distracted me so i didnt pay much attention to the letters, looked decent though. maybe post without colour?
     
  2. Teez-EmM!!!

    Teez-EmM!!! Elite Member

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    sample im liking thos colours but u should do more than just the s and the a do all of ur name it will look more complete
     
  3. neukr

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  4. silentchaos14

    silentchaos14 Elite Member

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  5. Sumoe

    Sumoe Elite Member

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    LOL...

    Pretty good, SUMO, you need to work a little bit more on structure and keep the same width with bars for now. Second one is lookin' good, though.
     
  6. urbanpirate

    urbanpirate Senior Member

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  7. silentchaos14

    silentchaos14 Elite Member

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    yeah i kinda figured there was someone with the name already but that wasnt really the reason for the one. it had nothing to with being the first to write it, it meant one as in me. if that makes sense
     
  8. Juicee

    Juicee Senior Member

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  9. thesilentvandal

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  10. Torrent

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    Bump. Any critique?
     
  11. AnteUp

    AnteUp Elite Member

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    best style form you BY FAR daws, keep it up
     
  12. jayes

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  13. AyteYourCookies

    AyteYourCookies Senior Member

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    Daws- that is tight
    jayes- nice simple.
     
  14. Sans

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  15. silentchaos14

    silentchaos14 Elite Member

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    personally i think thats too much extensions on two letters. lose most of those skinny ones just flyin all over the place
     
  16. eQust-tbk

    eQust-tbk Senior Member

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  17. D_U_K_E

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    its kinda tough to see cause its in pencil but let me no what u think and critcs
     

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  18. sex without condoms

    sex without condoms Elite Member

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    Everyone always complains that i never post "complete" work.
    i Fucking hate coloring!!!!!!!!

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    I kNOW i didnt color in the teeth. i didnt fuCKing want toooooooo N!ggerS!

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    and while i'm at it, fuck forcefields as well.
     
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  19. Stonk

    Stonk Senior Member

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    im liking those throws, just not so much the "b's" id say stick with the s.

    ok i was just messing around with extensions and add ons and what not.. i at first wasn't even planning on posting but i somewhat liked it at the end...ignore the "droppy antennas" hanging off the t and e.

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  20. Apoc Dozer

    Apoc Dozer Senior Member

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    Don't listen to the guy saying it's too plain

    All I would say is to clean up the lines a little, just make them straighter, and maybe make the Left side of D the same thickness as the right curved bar of D

    Other than that great simple

    But damn I'm really into that name, rolls off the tongue