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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. dajam410

    dajam410 Senior Member

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  2. IaMaMoRoN

    IaMaMoRoN Senior Member

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    yeah dude...im feeling the cover..tight peice
     
  3. Bazer

    Bazer Moderator

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    try doing something like this on the bottom.... just s suggestion.
    [Broken External Image]:http://www.inkart.com/images/lineart/oak_tree_roots.gif
     
  4. urbanpirate

    urbanpirate Senior Member

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  5. urbanpirate

    urbanpirate Senior Member

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    whahappen- nice clean it up a bit tho

    Cres- dont connect the RE, nice letering tho

    dajam- nice colors and backfround

    that HINT stuff is good too.

    Crits? [​IMG][/IMG]
     
  6. SenTheFirst

    SenTheFirst Senior Member

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  7. IaMaMoRoN

    IaMaMoRoN Senior Member

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    i dont know why but i like the way the r connects with the e.
    ai207.photobucket.com_albums_bb51_bsbclan4life_DSCF0239.jpg
     
  8. sex without condoms

    sex without condoms Elite Member

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  9. silentchaos14

    silentchaos14 Elite Member

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  10. daisyface

    daisyface Senior Member

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    yeah that shadow is pretty crappy, and your lines are really shaky, but the letters themselves are an alright shape. maybe make your d more blockier like the other ones --to silentchaos
     
  11. Jet

    Jet Elite Member

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    DaJam, props for the Bad Brains sticker!
     
  12. Apoc Dozer

    Apoc Dozer Senior Member

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    Ideal wtf happened to that clean simple, just go from that, keep the lines straight

    don't make it "sloppy", before you post your simple make sure it's clean if it's not then try again then post it

    If you already know whats wrong with it, then there is no point in posting it for critz
     
  13. silentchaos14

    silentchaos14 Elite Member

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    yeah that D is my one problem. i was thinkin of doin a lower case one, havent tried it yet. if i make it more blocky it will look like an O.

    i wanted to see if there was other shit i missed, i just pointed out the obvious. and i said that was a throw not a piece, even though that simple was really clean.
     
  14. Tunak

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    Looks like u got Parkinsons or some shit use a pen or somethin
     
  15. silentchaos14

    silentchaos14 Elite Member

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  16. Tunak

    Tunak Member

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    the pencil bled too? but fa real ive seen other shit by you and its always shakey im just sayin
     
  17. silentchaos14

    silentchaos14 Elite Member

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    yeah my hands are pretty shakey, the pencil i kinda sketched out a rough idea. sorta did the same with the marker but it did bleed alot. now back to the crits cuz this is spamming and i already got a warning for it
     
  18. jersOneTIC

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  19. whahappen?

    whahappen? Elite Member

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  20. silentchaos14

    silentchaos14 Elite Member

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    u have horrible luck with getting crits. but im gonna give u some. the throws seem really messy to me and the extra lines and stuff are distracting.