[Broken External Image]:http://img132.imageshack.us/img132/3953/skullmg9.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img132.imageshack.us/img132/859/greenfacemanyb0.jpg some things i did in the hospital last week. my scanner really killed the colours on the green one and that was my first real go at colour pencils. mass appeal, i like those letters, the only thing I think you should change is where the w curves inwards on the first bar. thats just what i think though
trac 227->[Broken External Image]:http://img87.imageshack.us/img87/1587/tracthrowfn3.jpg have to post here cause the throwie thread strictly no crits or some shit well crits please
i wanna work on some more bubblish throwz, anyone wanna do an exchange im down. View attachment 311887 View attachment 311888 View attachment 311889 View attachment 311890 at-handstyles lookin good, throwie needs work, i cant read it. mass appeal- that looks good, dont try to pregress yet just keep doin shit like that. fube- im loving your shit, the purple throw is sooo dope. drak- that okzen looks so good. the raby thing, i only like the r. use all capitols and itd look better, also lower the a's horizontal bar to the middle. thats just what i think would look good.
[Broken External Image]:http://img152.imageshack.us/img152/9112/1004144di1.jpg heres a simple pieace i did i need crits before i color it i know i fucked up the A&Z so im going to redo it
Start with more simple straight type block letters first. after those are down pat then start bending/curving/adding more bars and such. I'M JUST BUMPING THIS POST BECAUSE I DON'T THINK MOST PEOPLE HERE CHECK THE TOY STICKER THREAD.
Gartbage mannn its coo...still a very nice simple hand...it tickles me.. wRITERS..dont bother filling it dude...........do simples...basic blocks..i bet you everything that youll get told to do simples more times than your told your shits illing...trust me..you get more props for busting an ill simple than any other style you bust...iv seen it myself.. View attachment 311893 WORK IN PROGRESS Halloween theme peice for a collab with Bersex.. advancing.. well tryna.. mixing both styles together.. gots the dark looking A , W n H..and the cute bubbly M n A..
View attachment 311894 This is what I meant by the b-boy font.Here's a link: http://www.dafont.com/bboy.font Your newer piece is nice though.Just space out the letters a bit.
[Broken External Image]:http://img86.imageshack.us/img86/9005/1004146cn4.jpg i forgot i did a pieace last night its my first time using those grid 3d thingy so i know it needs work crits about anthing
bountyhunter what on earth makes you think you stand a chance of beating him? amwha- sikk to the max the m is ill, but i think you have put to many cuts in the letters, if you do all your letters like the m and a tht shit would be amazing. Craze- i think its better, but id do the sketch in the middle of the page next time, i always used to sketch from the bottom of the page up and it fucks up the letters, and it looks like you cant finish your letters... Got back into sketching mode and did a simpleish thing i like it, i still suck but i like it. View attachment 311915 Crits.
the giant space between the A's make it look weird. one thing i've learnt lately is that it makes letters look better if you cut the lines as soon as they interact unless you go for the specific look ofc which you are i know
[Broken External Image]:http://img87.imageshack.us/img87/6204/justinsphoto001kb4.jpg What do you guys think of my x?
you are a dunce. how does it fuck up the letters other than cutting off the bottom? have you ever seen pieces on the side of a train? most of the time they are cut off on the bottom. i dont think he was planning on painting trains or even had that in mind but i still dont get how it fucks up his letters. dont like your sketch either...i dunno just not feeling the lines
you are saying you dont know how to finish the bottom of the letters.... im saying who cares....hes not doing anything intricate. its not like cutting off the bottom of your letters would make them any worse.
you don't suck man. this shit is killin. your definetly on the right track. I've always loved yo steez. aight so on to the crits, the extension on the top right corner of the O looks a little odd, I think its a little to large... I'd toss the dot on the I. its nice to see you sketchin again man. vanilla softie, Toui ain't no dunce. pop off. anyways, I'll post up some shiz later. I'm workin on this holloween spectacular COLAB wit my man Amwhaahhhh. be prepared bitchesss
sex - i'm lovin that first one alot craze - your 3d is off in some places and your Z doesn't flow with the rest of the letters first time drawing anything graff related in about a month. I don't like the A just yet and i think i can really do a better K
Bumpin because i feel like it. Chalk_Make all your noticable connection equal like what you did with the first two letters. Sex:Not feelin the letters i like the scribbles goin off to nothingness though and the clean outline.. Whaam:Make it Wham?