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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. daisyface

    daisyface Senior Member

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    casa-despite what everyone else is saying i like that first one alot. the E on the second one, not so much. like borg said you should fatten it up a lil
    skribl-hmm too pointy for my taste, not much structure
    borg-your characters are getting better and better props

    experimenting with a new name kinda,

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    crits plz
     
  2. sKeeLo

    sKeeLo Senior Member

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    yeah i like the first casa too . . . didnt know you could bite such a simple U, a zillion people do it like that

    daisyface - i like how you have a consistent bend to your bars which helps it look right . . keep bending em every which way you can . . .maybe try pinchin the W in more tighter and bringin the middle bar up more, same thing with the E try bringin the 3 horizontal bars in more so it more tight/squished in and extend the middle bar of the E . . . with the yellowish 3d maybe try running a darker ornage on th einside to give it alil more depth and not soo much plain yellow look with all the open sapce 3d you have going, it takes 2 seconds but really makes 3ds look better in my opinion
     
  3. B$uR2EaTyOuRc0oKiEs

    B$uR2EaTyOuRc0oKiEs Member

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    bumped becuz no critz were givin
     
  4. SenTheFirst

    SenTheFirst Senior Member

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    ^^^ you need some finer tipped markers or something
    daisy- second one looks nice
    cile- dope

    i think im going to start writing ten10 b/c i just like t's a lot

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  5. Mello

    Mello Senior Member

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  6. capo93

    capo93 Senior Member

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    mello- not digging the m or the o the e and l have potential
    ten-digging that throw keep it up
    bsur- simples.. please
    casa- lookspretty decent
     
  7. FidelGastro

    FidelGastro Senior Member

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    mek im feelin the style drop a darker outline on those so we can see them better though and start doing more canvases/colored pieces. where the characs at?
     
  8. 2quiet2notice

    2quiet2notice New Member

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    im shite but ill drop a few in.
     

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  9. sex without condoms

    sex without condoms Elite Member

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  10. enigmatic

    enigmatic Senior Member

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  12. Saxaphone

    Saxaphone Senior Member

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    the blackbook cover is quite good, but i didnt like the second picture at all. mainly because of the squigglyness, it just made the letters look really bad. try doing some straight lines and curves n stuff instead of squiggley stuff. the blackbook cover is quite good though.
     
  13. Sumoe

    Sumoe Elite Member

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    Not trying to be an ass...

    But you're progressing at an extremely slow pace, Slient.

    But, you are improving at least.

    Forget about the squiggly shit for now, focus on the straight letters.
     
  14. Drakula

    Drakula Elite Member

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    Don't be fooled.I've seen people with twice the post count but are still toy toy toy.Ideal just keep with the simples and don't do anything else.Absolutely no bits coming off,little flairs,squiggly lines or lumpy letters.Do you know how to wield a pen man?No beef or anything but your letters no matter how simple have shaky as fuck lines.The newest one is a big improvement though.Just do that.
     
  15. garbage down tha way

    garbage down tha way Elite Member

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    new style i just made up on accident, anybody feelin it?
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    ideal- nice simple dude, lookin good. shit under it is ugly tho. keep ya lines straight.

    enigma- old school lookin fresh, that throwie is off the chain tho, so dope.

    capo- i dont know anything about euro so i cant crit that but, its kinda ugly, reminds me of a playground. throwz dont look to bad tho, id work on those some.

    mello- yer m looks like an octopus, id fix that. pretty much make your simples a little more readable, like the e is two pieces and the l is also. the o doesnt fit with the rest.

    ten- the top one is my favorite, id go with that one. the t is lookin hot.
     
  16. sketch3

    sketch3 Banned

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    i like your first s, mayb cuss its kinda similer to mine
     
  17. garbage down tha way

    garbage down tha way Elite Member

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    hahaha ouuuch its an r. but your right it does look like an s. hahaha
     
  18. Sans

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  19. Socrates

    Socrates Senior Member

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    yooo
    tooo much hatin

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  20. lordloss

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