well if hes one of your favorites that means that you are heavily influenced by him and looks like you were a little too heavily influenced. im gonna call biting though for sure. just look at the bar that underlines both peices, then look at the extentions on both, then look at the s, w , and e. maybe try and tweak that around to where it isn't a bite. edit - my bad didn't read the posts underneath
fube, i think theres too much going on in that sketch with the style youve got. i like that style simpler. [Broken External Image]:http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l145/mblavis777/shit-2.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l145/mblavis777/randomletters.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l145/mblavis777/asianboy.jpg
alright, so, i know my shyt is pretty wack, so ya dont gotta tell me cuz i already know. im just lookin for advise on how i can improve, so open fire, tell me what sucks and what works......... peace
new page bump. ayleus, just keep sketching till you're happy with your own shit. then post up. the handstyle is gettin there.
i dont bump often, but i like this. so im wanting actual crit. note taken nem. thanks for the input but i like busy. not feelin the scab, your s overlaps the c to much, your letters are not evenly thick. keep workin simple. concentrate on keeping your thickness the same. think more "letters" then "fill"
ayle- i like the 4th one [Broken External Image]:http://img217.imageshack.us/img217/2610/im001408wn1.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img235.imageshack.us/img235/9206/im001409bx9.jpg
do u not own paper? i cant make out the first few letters but i see a W and an S and they are nice. [Broken External Image]:http://i186.photobucket.com/albums/x65/silentchaos14/IDEAL/IDEL.jpg quick little sketch, kinda feelin it. i couldnt think of how to do the A for it though crits?
i gotta ask-who the hell would pay that much for simps??????? thats a 15 min job!!!!!!!!! nice nonetheless
thats what i was thinking. some kid in my dorm was telling me that the barber shop he goes to wants something painted like that and thats what they were paying plus the paint. he wants us BOTH to paint it. so we'd each get $250. whatever, money's money. hes still gotta talk to him and figure out details.