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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. Olick

    Olick Elite Member

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    1st. not really feeling the N but the R and A are lookin dope. dont really like color combination

    2nd nice colors but the addon on the S kinda kills me inside =[ not feeling the N again

    3rd color combo lookin good. really diggin the A. not feeling the N "again hah" but open up the bottum half of the E and youll be set

    4th color combo- loose the weird little green spots. i dont kno how that fits into the piece haha the R looks dope and the S is gettin better

    5th really love that color combo. im feelin the A and R the S is ok. but once again. the N lol

    6th. possible the best letter structure out of all of them. really liken it alot. the N is perfect and so are the other leters. they all flow with the same style.

    overall: your good. great pencil/pen control. i didnt see you go over the lines once haha. good pieces but work on the N and color combo. i liked it alot
     
  2. NaRsyONE*

    NaRsyONE* Senior Member

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    lol thanks N's are bitches n 3rd one the "E" is rly a "y" (narsy) lol its more clear if you were lookin at the drawing itself n its the first "y" ive ever done idk if that changes anything n i just noticed it rly rly looks like An "e"
     
  3. Olick

    Olick Elite Member

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    oh i can see the connection in your Y now hahah.
     
  4. Samp1e

    Samp1e Senior Member

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  5. Bizzaro

    Bizzaro Senior Member

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    Narsey shit looks sick just move the letters abit closer
    Ideal you gota do block letters like on your keyboard
    sen everythings good except somthing about the upper part of the s seems funny
    sezer dope characters and nice simples.
    ai227.photobucket.com_albums_dd49_Bizzaro_album_5.jpg
    ai227.photobucket.com_albums_dd49_Bizzaro_album_4.jpg
    ai227.photobucket.com_albums_dd49_Bizzaro_album_3.jpg
    ai227.photobucket.com_albums_dd49_Bizzaro_album_2.jpg
    ai227.photobucket.com_albums_dd49_Bizzaro_album_1.jpg

    im new... crits?
     
  6. Olick

    Olick Elite Member

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    perfect. if a few years youll be good as hell
     
  7. Samp1e

    Samp1e Senior Member

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    right on. keep pushing those simples and you're on your way
     
  8. Bizzaro

    Bizzaro Senior Member

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    lol i dont wana wait a few years lol but yeah i know it takes time but any crits to speed up the process?
     
  9. d_g

    d_g Elite Member

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    Keep doing the simples and don't get ahead of yourself.

    Getting ahead of yourself 99% of the time is a waste of time. Fastest way for most people is to just keep working on simples.
     
  10. Bizzaro

    Bizzaro Senior Member

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    ok ill post in a few days with some new sketches
     
  11. Robbie P

    Robbie P Senior Member

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    Work on your hand dude. Also most writers you see that totally kill have been writing for 15 years plus, just stick with it.
     
  12. "Fasho" T|y|B

    "Fasho" T|y|B Senior Member

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    tezer those are mad chars

    narsy i like everysingle one of em!

    samp that shit makes me just wanna try somethin sick like that but i need to stick with simples for now haha love it

    beser- flawless simples!

    ok ive been working on my letters
    the S is kinda funky but fuck it ill put it up anyway
    ai37.photobucket.com_albums_e74_thedoppleganger88_Fash_1.jpg
    ai37.photobucket.com_albums_e74_thedoppleganger88_FashF.jpg
    ai37.photobucket.com_albums_e74_thedoppleganger88_FashA.jpg
    ai37.photobucket.com_albums_e74_thedoppleganger88_FashS.jpg
    ai37.photobucket.com_albums_e74_thedoppleganger88_FashH.jpg
    am i getting ahead of myself?
    crits plz
    sorry for shitty cam pics
     
  13. Roolete

    Roolete Elite Member

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    keep working. but please change your sig, its uggggglllyyy
     
  14. T O K E

    T O K E Elite Member

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    i love it, i want to draw surrealistically can you point me in the right direction?

    as for the letters, the A is fire, the F doesnt really look like a f get rid of the stuff on the bottom right, take the breaks out of the s, h is simple but nice
     
  15. "Fasho" T|y|B

    "Fasho" T|y|B Senior Member

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    haha thanks toke
    yeah i see it now the f looks like a J
    that s was experimental didnt know where i was goin with it haha

    yeah you like surrealism? sick thats my steez mang yeah i can hep you out if ya want
     
  16. T O K E

    T O K E Elite Member

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    that would be great if you could just point me in the right direction and get me started
     
  17. Roolete

    Roolete Elite Member

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    hey guys! how bowcha move this on into another thread, eh?
     
  18. "Fasho" T|y|B

    "Fasho" T|y|B Senior Member

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    ai37.photobucket.com_albums_e74_thedoppleganger88_TYBFIN_2_1.jpg
    help me out with this y

    someone said i should make the bottom fatter and more 3d and the top skinnier?
     
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  19. librelikespie

    librelikespie Senior Member

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    fash - i think its too flash, with the hole in the top making it look like a G and the break in the tail and the extension through the body of the Y and the arrow, it makes it look like you are trying too hard. i dunno, mabye colour in the 3D and see if it looks better or focus more on changing up the letter instead of just adding extensions...

    heres some shit from late:
    ai160.photobucket.com_albums_t175_mud_aura_img129.jpg
    A tag/throw/character, its kinda all combined into one:
    ai160.photobucket.com_albums_t175_mud_aura_img130.jpg
    ai160.photobucket.com_albums_t175_mud_aura_img131.jpg
     
    Last edited: Nov 12, 2007
  20. South-Pole

    South-Pole Elite Member

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    ^i'v always loved your characters,the top one the letters are ok,seconde one i only see a mix between a handie and a character nice work