Akes- Try not to make the bottom of the S overlap the top... Use the bars technique when sketching your letters... Try not to do everything that curvy until your bars have given it a decen structure. Enormous - I dont really like that man. Same crit as I gave to Akes... the barrrssss.... Although I love the characters... Ayte - Good use of the bars... Im not really liking that A and the 2nd part of the Y has to come higher.. Now for my throwie... Made some progress I think... What do you guys think I can improve on? Im pretty happy with this effort but I always want to improve it. [Broken External Image]:http://img204.imageshack.us/img204/3411/image007uu0.jpg
wyze - i like your w and y but your z and e need to be the same size bon3s - i dont like the style but i think thats just me
bon3s- your letter spacing is off and the style is meh... originalhomeboy- i like it but the z needs a little work and i dont like that top thing comming off the e
yeah bets. your letters go from big to small. fix it, then do it cleaner, and then do it again. and then cut ur lines with the black marker so itll look like it was done on the computer and then you printed it. itll look clean kinda like this.
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dusk, letters are alright, better than lots of other stuff i've seen. love the 3d, looks great bon3s i like what you're doing. first pic, great simplicity looks awesome. second pic letters are confusing and you definately need 3d or a shadow in there. third one LOVE IT, just squeeze your letters together a bit more enormous the character is kinda cool. the letters are no good. (second pic) no, really not good original homeboy, the y is pretty good the e is pretty good but needs to match the style of the others a bit better, other letters need major work. if it's a throwie, throw in a black dropshadow THEN the outline. it'll make it look maaad better if you do it right. (second pic) looks waaaay better next time throw in some shadow and you're set dream creation i donno man, i like the "play"haha i'd love to see it a bit less sketchy to see how it looks. don't make the first letter into an arrow that looks weird garbage i like it except for the r sez it's all absolutely beautiful. you are by far my idol cookies i like it nice and simple. i'd like to see how it looks outlined or coloured. skuz second one looks decent first one looks terrible dim it's really cool i like it alot. maybe make the arrows different kool aid good start. make your shadow thicker bets it's good i like very much baze not bad, i've definately seen much much worse done wrong forum new style. after seeing sez's stuff i'm thinking i might want to go for evenly sized bars but w.e i'll do that for my next. i know the star and r look kinda fucked. what do you think of this one? crits GREATLY appreciated
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FAIL - Im diggin that piece a lot, the handstyle too. CSone - That monopoly idea is great I got a lot done today and have 2 throwups and 3 pieces. Keep in mind that these are my first pieces ever and I am still learning letter structure. Also, I am color blind and have a lot of problems with color....:/ Anyways here goes:
Rast - The first one is by far the best. Except change your R. Theres about 24 letters it looks like.... FailsOne - What the fuck? Go away. Seriously. It's the freshest of dopeness. C-SONE - Seriosuly. You can go away aswell. Kosher - Im digging the style of the piece but not a fan of the jagged edges... Once again im still working on that throw... -yes i now realise that the join in the "E" shouldve been bigger and lower. [Broken External Image]:http://img260.imageshack.us/img260/4872/wyzethrowwa0.jpg
skuz second one fresh loose the dagger points though ayte bring your ay and your te closer together and the e is big compard to the rest FRESH OUTA JUVIE SHIT lota unfinished shit i got angry with how they were going so i didnt finish em crit
besar- try advancing the one next to three more hours that you stretched out a bit besides that it the same stuff that you allways post which i do like =)
besar- lookin good c-sone- likin that monopoly shit. i havent seen anything like it before. your letters look a little squished though. [Broken External Image]:http://i186.photobucket.com/albums/x65/silentchaos14/IDEAL7.jpg jst a re-post because i only got like 3 crits. more crits?