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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. Bizzaro

    Bizzaro Senior Member

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    a quick sketch critz

  2. silentchaos14

    silentchaos14 Elite Member

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    hahaahahaha oh shit i didnt even realize that was the monopoly man. i saw that shit awhile ago.
    besar- try something different. u seem to have that simple down pretty good.
  3. SEIZE [reppin yo hood]

    SEIZE [reppin yo hood] Elite Member

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    bump for more crits
  4. BORG

    BORG Moderator

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    ^^the i takes away from the piece, too big, make it the same size as the other letters
  5. sank.

    sank. Senior Member

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    seize. it doesn't have any flow to it and borg is right, the big I in the middle takes away from it. try making your letters by using bars, cause it will open a whole new level of possibilities for you...
  6. Bizzaro

    Bizzaro Senior Member

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  7. YarHarHar

    YarHarHar Senior Member

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  8. 603

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  9. ESKiMO2

    ESKiMO2 Elite Member

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    Berst- I like it but fix the S. Make it as big as the other letters.

    Okay, Heres mine I did last night.


    [Broken External Image]:

    This is a draft. I need ideas of what I should change or add.

    I am already going to change the P and I am not going to add a drop shadow.
    Anything else?
  10. Enormous

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  11. Olick

    Olick Elite Member

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    dont get ahead of yourself. stick to simples until you rock the fuck out of them
  12. Bizzaro

    Bizzaro Senior Member

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    im prolly gona switch my name up to beas
  13. NaRsyONE*

    NaRsyONE* Senior Member

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    besar-your simps are rly improvingalot
    nispi-go back to simples your letters arent developed n look garbagey
    seka-pretty dope but make the s' taller n work on the k'
    603-lose the arrow ,work on the first letter cant tell if its a b' or an r' n space out the r' and the s' they look crunched
    seize-im def diggin your style but get rid of the space in the middle of your word
  14. popshots

    popshots Senior Member

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    enormous: you got potential dont work on coloring jus keep on those letters
    eskimo2: do simples with some style
    beser: work on the s and the r a lot
  15. avore

    avore Banned

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  16. enigmatic

    enigmatic Senior Member

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  17. Bizzaro

    Bizzaro Senior Member

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    drone your new shit is wayy beter then the old shit keep it up
    enig dope fill on the second one but one your first two the k's look fucked
    nispi that sketch reminds me of crumpled paper
    enor looks fresh dope 3D


    trying three D seeing as i dont use it much crits?
  18. SA One

    SA One New Member

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  20. sk8er6

    sk8er6 Senior Member

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