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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. Bizzaro

    Bizzaro Senior Member

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    jus found out mah buddy jus got locked up and yes i know my letters tend to go from big to small im working on it
     
  2. 5Funerals

    5Funerals Senior Member

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    Besar - try making the E in the first one straighter it might flow better
     
  3. Bizzaro

    Bizzaro Senior Member

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  4. Bets369R

    Bets369R Elite Member

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    nah i just think the bars are too fat..heres the changes i think would make it look better

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    edit: for some reason i left the line in the middle of the B..that shouldnt be there :/
     
  5. urbanpirate

    urbanpirate Senior Member

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    maste- leave out the weird bars near the letters..and work on your letter structure
    besar-i like it, but i think theres too much sspace between the e and s, ans i think the the top ending of the S should come out more, if that makes sense. and sorry about your friend getting locked up.
     
  6. MainEvent

    MainEvent Senior Member

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    besar- feelin it man, dope simples.
    maste- good start fam. peep the tutorial thread and rock some bars to get your lettering down. peep what besar is doing and try to emulate that. get the foundation down first. keep drawing, stay up.

    haha i know im wack at sketching, but i feel compelled to post em. all shit i did today while i was mad bored during thanksgiving. some random ish

    [Broken External Image]:http://i217.photobucket.com/albums/cc209/Balance24/My Graf/100_2280.jpg

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  7. Bizzaro

    Bizzaro Senior Member

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    kk so i fixed the bars on the B and the R and i made the top of the S come out more and i sorta made the gap between the e and the s smaller by extending the end of the s out more lol
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    main r those all pen freestyles?
     
  8. Machine

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  9. Bets369R

    Bets369R Elite Member

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    the B still looks likda weird to me..try making the verticle bar a little skinnier to give the middle of the B some room
     
  10. SenTheFirst

    SenTheFirst Senior Member

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    main - start bending
    besar- not bad simples

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  11. Pharoah

    Pharoah Senior Member

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  12. dim

    dim Elite Member

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    bumpin this on
     
  13. garbage down tha way

    garbage down tha way Elite Member

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    dim- not bad, im diggin your p, i just hate that extention on the top of the e

    cream-ouuchh. the purple one aint too bad tho. keep doin simples like that.

    sen- you gotta a dope ass throwie son.
     
  14. Sumoe

    Sumoe Elite Member

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  15. BORG

    BORG Moderator

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    over- i'd close up all the space in the letters
    sume-looks dope, love how its backwards
     
  16. Sumoe

    Sumoe Elite Member

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    Haha, naw, it is the web cam.

    It is not supposed to be backwards, but I kinda like it backwards.

    3muz

    ha.
     
  17. 5Funerals

    5Funerals Senior Member

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    Cream - really all I got to say is keep doing it over and over again
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    Crits?
     
  18. Captain

    Captain Senior Member

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    rast try keeping your bars an even width throughout for now.
    cream, use bars
    sen it looks good. keep it up.
     
    Last edited: Nov 23, 2007
  19. Mass Appeal

    Mass Appeal Banned

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  20. Bizzaro

    Bizzaro Senior Member

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    dope shit yall trying somthing new i know the 3d is mad of i got sloppy