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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. the end

    the end Senior Member

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    besar - i can dig that style, work on the AR though, the legs overlapping throws it off a bit, i would suggest shorter legs like on the E and S.

    amk - your old shit was way better
     
  2. BIGel

    BIGel Elite Member

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    sume is sick! props to amk as well.

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  3. Xored

    Xored Member

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  4. SenTheFirst

    SenTheFirst Senior Member

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    sume el and amk - stupid clean

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  5. ESKiMO2

    ESKiMO2 Elite Member

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  6. Fube

    Fube Elite Member

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    ^^bump^^

    cus u people need to listen to it. nothin but truth there.

    also, bump- garbage down tha way, big el, sumoe, and amk.
     
  7. Bizzaro

    Bizzaro Senior Member

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    lota fuckups to lazy to fix em
     
  8. LikeOner

    LikeOner Senior Member

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    I agree with the simples thing. Not only because they are good for beginners, but because simples can actually be the hottest things you can do if you get them good. A real good looking simple can look way better than a mediocre wildstyle.

    Besar - thats a good start on that style but the A and R dont look good with the legs like that. Maybe swoop the leg out further a little and curve the leg a little so it doesnt come all the way back like that if you know what I mean. Your progressing well I'd say, I think I need to sketch more often cause I'm at a standstill.

    Sumoe and BigEl - so sick. you guys aren't toys.
     
  9. Bizzaro

    Bizzaro Senior Member

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    i know yall aint accusing me of biting
     
  10. kosher

    kosher Senior Member

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    sen i don't really like your letters.
    pharo, it's an okay start but HELLA unclean
    garbage i like your letters alot except for the r
    sumoe, what can i say. gorgeous.
    rast it's okay, don't really know what i can say to make it better, just keep practising.
    mass appeal, keep it simple
    bigel, beautiful work as always.
    bizzaro it's looking better than your other stuff.

    after seeing tezer's nice simple looking letters i decided to switch up my style. here's my first attempt.

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  11. 603

    603 Senior Member

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    the 1st and 3rd ones look alot like they say mayyer
     
  12. MrGraffiti

    MrGraffiti Senior Member

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    for the name sketch battle comments?
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  13. Bizzaro

    Bizzaro Senior Member

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    go back to simples never end your letters with arrows loose the lines and ur name shouldnt be mr graffiti
     
  14. einsamkeit

    einsamkeit Senior Member

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    it's really unbalanced looking, with everything coming out the bottom like that.and i'm not digging the arrows. I do like the M though.
     
  15. glyce

    glyce Senior Member

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    mrgraffiti- yeah i agree with every one else, i think it looks pritty cool but i dont like all that stuff coming off the bottom

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    any crits?
     
  16. munch1

    munch1 Member

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    chill the fuck out.

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    yo glyce
    looks good
    the a is a little off but still good

    mr graffiti..
    its good just needs to flow better

    yeah i was just fucking around on the rest of the paper
    thanks for the crits... yougot ne thing posted einsamkeit?

    bizzaro your shit is clean, i think your s should have less sapce like your b and r
    bsides that it is sick

    sezer- dope
    mr graffiti- its lookin good

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    crits

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    looks good.. i would lose the dot on the I
     
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  17. einsamkeit

    einsamkeit Senior Member

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    Soank... i'm digging it, i've always loved the simple stuff

    Munch... I'm loving the throwies , your peices need some work, especially the bottom half of the 1st page. The top left looks sick though.

    keep it up
     
  18. Bizzaro

    Bizzaro Senior Member

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    the a kills it crit
    munch dope throwie but ya ur peices need work keep evolving your letters and start by drawing em like you did the RTB with the bubbles around it
    soank the hole in the a is off
    mayer those r meh i duno what the letter after the y is supposed to be n whats wit de dot
     
  19. Edward"Sezer"Hands

    Edward"Sezer"Hands Elite Member

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  20. MrGraffiti

    MrGraffiti Senior Member

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    some new style im trying to learn from a friends
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