besar - i can dig that style, work on the AR though, the legs overlapping throws it off a bit, i would suggest shorter legs like on the E and S. amk - your old shit was way better
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Theres a simple... [Broken External Image]:http://img129.imageshack.us/img129/2924/dscf0227dt7.jpg It isn't very satisfying.
^^bump^^ cus u people need to listen to it. nothin but truth there. also, bump- garbage down tha way, big el, sumoe, and amk.
I agree with the simples thing. Not only because they are good for beginners, but because simples can actually be the hottest things you can do if you get them good. A real good looking simple can look way better than a mediocre wildstyle. Besar - thats a good start on that style but the A and R dont look good with the legs like that. Maybe swoop the leg out further a little and curve the leg a little so it doesnt come all the way back like that if you know what I mean. Your progressing well I'd say, I think I need to sketch more often cause I'm at a standstill. Sumoe and BigEl - so sick. you guys aren't toys.
sen i don't really like your letters. pharo, it's an okay start but HELLA unclean garbage i like your letters alot except for the r sumoe, what can i say. gorgeous. rast it's okay, don't really know what i can say to make it better, just keep practising. mass appeal, keep it simple bigel, beautiful work as always. bizzaro it's looking better than your other stuff. after seeing tezer's nice simple looking letters i decided to switch up my style. here's my first attempt.
go back to simples never end your letters with arrows loose the lines and ur name shouldnt be mr graffiti
it's really unbalanced looking, with everything coming out the bottom like that.and i'm not digging the arrows. I do like the M though.
mrgraffiti- yeah i agree with every one else, i think it looks pritty cool but i dont like all that stuff coming off the bottom any crits?
chill the fuck out. [Broken External Image]:http://i202.photobucket.com/albums/aa17/erjayallday/CCF11232007_00003.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://i202.photobucket.com/albums/aa17/erjayallday/CopyofCCF11232007_00000.jpg yo glyce looks good the a is a little off but still good mr graffiti.. its good just needs to flow better yeah i was just fucking around on the rest of the paper thanks for the crits... yougot ne thing posted einsamkeit? bizzaro your shit is clean, i think your s should have less sapce like your b and r bsides that it is sick sezer- dope mr graffiti- its lookin good [Broken External Image]:http://i202.photobucket.com/albums/aa17/erjayallday/CopyofCCF11232007_00001.jpg crits [Broken External Image]:http://i202.photobucket.com/albums/aa17/erjayallday/CopyofCCF11232007_00002-1.jpgcrits [Broken External Image]:http://i202.photobucket.com/albums/aa17/erjayallday/CopyofCCF11232007_00004.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://i202.photobucket.com/albums/aa17/erjayallday/CopyofCCF11232007_00005.jpg looks good.. i would lose the dot on the I
Soank... i'm digging it, i've always loved the simple stuff Munch... I'm loving the throwies , your peices need some work, especially the bottom half of the 1st page. The top left looks sick though. keep it up
the a kills it crit munch dope throwie but ya ur peices need work keep evolving your letters and start by drawing em like you did the RTB with the bubbles around it soank the hole in the a is off mayer those r meh i duno what the letter after the y is supposed to be n whats wit de dot