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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. ESKiMO2

    ESKiMO2 Elite Member

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    First one is okay. Your style is unique and if you keep working on it, it will be awesome.
     
  2. HadeP

    HadeP Senior Member

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    chill guy, he doesnt need new to graff thread his shit isnt even that bad, you need to relax hardcore. its the internet dude.also chill your ego. your amk stuff was better.
    peace.
    ai172.photobucket.com_albums_w9_pphadee_Picture050.jpg
    random pen sketch.
    crits, comments, whateves
     
  3. Haz-E

    Haz-E Senior Member

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    well HADEP i like and dont like i hate the gold DRIPS/WEBS w.e u would like to call em get rid of that tooth looking thing on the lower bar of the "F" the E is the best part
     
  4. jersOneTIC

    jersOneTIC Senior Member

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    tezer - nice throwie
    librelikespie - the pieces are dope, but the only thing u need to work on is you throws
    kosher - pretty good, but you need to work on your j
    star01 - work on your tag, imo try makin your throwie round
    tryin some new shit...crits?
    [Broken External Image]:http://img252.imageshack.us/img252/6207/sketchyg7.jpg
    *edit* ill post a better flick later
     
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  5. HadeP

    HadeP Senior Member

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    jers thats sick man
    ai172.photobucket.com_albums_w9_pphadee_Picture051.jpg
    took my time on and used pencil, made a bit of changes.
    just gotta ink it
    what yall think?
     
  6. Sancer

    Sancer Senior Member

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    yo this isn't bad at all
    you probably shouldnt be here hahaa
     
  7. afrillisdark

    afrillisdark Member

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    you guy's camera skills suck lol


    why is everyone progressing. i've been practicing every day but i still stuck.
     
  8. Captain

    Captain Senior Member

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    -fen, try and even out the heights of your letters.
    -jers I don't like how it looks derived from some kind of two point perspective shizz or whatever, but other than that it looks alright.
    -libre, define each letter with its stereotypical structure a little more. if i didn't know what it said i'd have a hard time reading it.
    -star, practice up your straight lines and bars
    -kosher i dunno about the penstyle, but that pencil one looks kinda promising if you would warp for flow a bit (don't make it uniform though). And remember to fix up the Y/J thing that everyone mentioned.
    -fluffy, squeeze the letters together and bend the bars just a little next time. see if that helps.


    a letter practice i never finished
    [Broken External Image]:http://img144.imageshack.us/img144/2742/letterpracticetp7.jpg

    waay overdue exchange with scab, didn't turn out as well as i had hoped.
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    ps. I know it looks like I missed the shadow on part of the 'b', but I didn't. I checked with my sketch under it. Looks wonky though, huh?
     
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  9. kosher

    kosher Senior Member

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    jers, i like it WAY more without the curl on the r. it looks SICK.
     
  10. RFI. SPit

    RFI. SPit Moderator

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  11. Fluffy Bunnies

    Fluffy Bunnies Elite Member

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    Lookin mad dope you know, it's like an orgasm.:rolleyes::rolleyes::rolleyes:


    haha
     
  12. Bizzaro

    Bizzaro Senior Member

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    dope shit spit and scab your shit would look better if u had made the c the same size as the other letters
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    crits?
     
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  13. F3B3S

    F3B3S Senior Member

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    bored...sumthign alil old

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  14. capo93

    capo93 Senior Member

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    LOLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL BELIO... but really work on some bars and getting your own characters
     
  15. Bizzaro

    Bizzaro Senior Member

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    whos characs r they?
     
  16. dim

    dim Elite Member

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  17. capo93

    capo93 Senior Member

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    not saying direct bite or anything just highhhhhhhhhhhhhhhly influenced...
     
  18. Olick

    Olick Elite Member

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  19. Bizzaro

    Bizzaro Senior Member

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    ye thats what i was thinking the same thing it doesnt give me an orgasm i guess im not as sensitive as mr fluffy lol
     
  20. ASLOS

    ASLOS Senior Member

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