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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. Captain

    Captain Senior Member

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    bump because of end of page faggotry.
     
  2. BORG

    BORG Moderator

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    cade- very good, much improvement
    jers- looks good, liked the older ish more though
    zof- cool man, work on the flow between the f and the o
    captain- make all the letters the same size, i'm not too big on the bottom sketch, too much random lines that work away from the bars

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    simples for daws
     
  3. koer1

    koer1 Member

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    ai11.tinypic.com_6lm3ukz.jpg
    its fugly.. i wanna learn how to piece bad.. and idk how to bend/no markers
     
  4. harry

    harry Senior Member

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    hey borg your style is so fucking fresh and simple i love it would u sketch up either sarz or tole and post it for me i wont bite i would just love to see it cause i love your simple style would be a great help for me if you did im just trying to find a nice simple structure for my letters in these words i wont bite but it would just give me some idea for the structure of my letters and how to make my simples fresh without adding anything and just having a clean shape it would be heaps appreciated! peace
     
  5. *Wing*

    *Wing* Senior Member

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    Bizzaro, you have very similar letters, my suggestion is that you try to make a difference between them
    Jers, RFI, Borg, Capitain, dope stuff! Props to all, esp Capitain for sharing his alphabet, although it's not in the right order :p
    Cade, shorten the block and it will look much better.
    Samp1e, nice work, I like it!
    beyondyereyes, thicknen the letters a bit and ink it, and try putting a block on the left or right, could look cooler...
    Nice invert seize, like the E's! I suggest you to move the letters away from each other as you're improving them because the structure will be more noticeable then...
     
  6. renz198

    renz198 Member

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    love thi sman really nice simple would love to see that when u paint it
     
  7. *Wing*

    *Wing* Senior Member

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    Also, props to silentchaos for going more complicated, although it needs work, it's positive because you encouraged yourself to experiment!
    Koer, your r and e are ok, but do the rest of the piece in quite simpler way, it could look better, and it would be easier to do on the wall!
     
  8. amk

    amk Elite Member

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    my man CILE is ILLEN !!!
    Captain..i see an huge Sample bite / influence on that S...i may be wrrong..either way the sketch is kool..looks nice..

    And for all the goons who said my AMK shit is better than my new shit...who was to say i wasnt doing AMK type shit anymore eeehhhh...i was jus tryin sumthin new out..

    love you.
    bye
     
  9. koer1

    koer1 Member

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    k thanks

    heres another one
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  10. afrillisdark

    afrillisdark Member

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    satan... thats too many letters, unless ur flash n u can do everything fast... gosh.. i bet you flash was awesome with a can huh? lol.... anyways i like how ur letter are really simple and arent warped. nice and clean. its pretty. u must have really nice handwriting.

    sharpie makes PAINT markers?! im such a noob
     
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  11. afrillisdark

    afrillisdark Member

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    koer... ur E is undefined. i cant see it as clear as the other letters
     
  12. SkuzSCT

    SkuzSCT Senior Member

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    One colour battle, probably not my final entry but tell me what you think anyways...
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  13. afrillisdark

    afrillisdark Member

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    skuz. nice perspective. and for a monocrom it doesnt look like a blob.
     
  14. sketch3

    sketch3 Banned

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    its overcrowded,


    disconect all the letters and loose all the extensions, then fatten up ur letters a lil bit
     
  15. sex without condoms

    sex without condoms Elite Member

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    the toy tags thread dont get enough heat so w.e
    shit for my nuggah potatoe

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    there was more.
    ignore the shitty ass piece with all the yucky dot connections.
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  16. thos taggs are pretty claen, nice work
     
  17. Captain

    Captain Senior Member

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    find me a pic. I didn't bite anything, but I wouldn't doubt that it's similar to something. There are only so many ways to do a letter, it's not impossible to see the same thing twice.

    oh and thanks to the two people who gave a crit/comment.
    but really, use pics to back up a statement like that man.
     
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  18. -ShAmEE-

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  19. HadeP

    HadeP Senior Member

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    koer im feelin the E, the k has a few extentions that arnt needed, the o doesnt really flow, and the r is alright to.
    borg your simples are so ill
    scab feelin tha red double outs, with the black, looks good.
    jers still super stoked on your style, i dunno what it is, just looks good to me
    beyond lookin alright, try shoven those letters together.
    cade, good simples, try and keep those lines steady
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    a little somethin i worked up this morning, what you all think?
     
  20. daisyface

    daisyface Senior Member

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    hade- like the handy at the top
    shamee-good but the e doesnt really match
    sex-second to last handy is my fav.
    skuz-bottom part of the k is a bit too skinny i think

    umm so crits? arrows kinda whack i know
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