fasho- that character is sick
zof- that style is lookin good. the O's are wierd in the second sketch.
cher- the H is fucked. in the tag the E sorta looks like an O.
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EDIT
@ SWOE
Dont make both the O and E pink
if you choose to those i'd make the outline thicker

 

fuck the color your structure is horrible no flow with the w or the o and some dumb lookin shit on the bottom of the s and e.
stop bumping that garbage with color.

 

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bummmpp =]

 

bump since u fuckers are beefin.

 

Allright Guys U Got BEEF An W/e But Talkin Bout Fightin In Real Life Over The Net Is Stupid, I Think U Shud Take It To Pms...
Ps Swoe In Case U Didnt Notice Ur S And E Have Tumors
PPS -JROC THATS DISGUSTING, JUST UR SAME OLD SIMPLES WITH ORANG SHIT ON IT, BIG WHOOP.
U OT SIMPLES DOWN NOW U GOTTA ACTUALLY DO SUMTHING WITH EM, EXTENTIONS OR ANYTHIN

 

Just finished.
ps. stop the fucking beef.
Ya know what, YOU ALL SUCK!

jp.



the E sucked.

idk which picture is better, you tell me.

 

i love the very top, except i think the the teeth on the o would look better if they were white. it makes me feel primal

 

Im Not Hatin For Hatins Sake, The W Looks Fine To Me, So Did Sum Half Throw Alf Peice Thing He Did. But Teze Is Right The S An E Must Have Downs Syndrom

 

i agree that the E doesnt really flow with it and it looks kinda like an I if you didnt know it said swoe and how the w isnt the same color as the rest throws it off but other than that shit it looks fucking good as hell. idk das my opinion
and his character is sick

and sex dude i like your style haha that firs ones too tight!

 

Ideal, I honestly do not understand why you have shown little to no improvement. You started with simples, and you tried working your way up, but there has been very little (noticeable) improvement within your letter forms and structure. All I can say is keep doing what you are doing, maybe it will come to you. I mean, you started around the same time as me and many others on this site. I do not know what else to tell you.
P.S. All of you "beefers" need to chill the fuck out, and shut the fuck up.

 

I like the teeth, they would look dope in white tho.

 

Im feelin that K mang!

 

not feelin the a bigel, rest is DOPE
an i gotta agree wit sume, u rock the same letters in every sketch with minute difference, try changing the angle or thickness of the bars u ues not just the color scheme

 

i woulda made the teeth white but i colored the O in first and did the mouth after the fact

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Swoe : love the character

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inspiration from tezer =]

 

so i started about in january last year but i havent sketched nething for 8 months now. i just drew sumthin up nd wen i went on here realized wat a long way i still had to go. *sighs*

well here it is... oba

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