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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.
Sintakz - you did not use bars.
Aker - looking good except for the constant increase in size and the last leg of the R.
rast-its ok...try a diff. style of lettering for ur throw up
besar your shit is gettin better every. single. post. im lovin it man. your gonna be great. keep the good shit up man.
Bars are pointless to me as I did bars for quite some time when I used to write 2-Ez and It doesn't work out because off the get-go the letters in my name don't flow all that well together. I use a handstyle type "sketch" as my basis for what I am drawing and go from there.
As for aker I'm digging it except for the "R" and the "one"
dude bars work for everyone because letters are letters. they dont change based on what order they are in with other letters. Any word can flow if you can rock it the right way.
The problem with me is that I draw from my head. I'm not like people who first start off with a circle and guidelines, then I add circles for the eyes, nose and mouth, then a rough sketch of the hair. Then erase the guide lines. Fuck that. I jump straight on into actually drawing what needs to be drawn. I'm no good at. "Ok bar here. And here. Oh, oh, a bar here too"
tahts why your stuff doesnt look any good or have any flow.
you gotta use bars in order to learn structure.
Bars will really improve your stuff man. I use to try and freestyle all my stuff too and it looked terrible until I started actually using bars.
besar- very dope
tek- wack (been trying to keep it one word on crits, but get a new name too. TekNYC already is fresh)
drone- very dope
did this in a quick minute. know it's kina sloppy but say whatever you wanna say.
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I think this is pretty cool! I'd say work on the R and try not to take it tooooo wild, but other than that props
so i dont understand bars...ill admit it...i just dont thats why i didnt want to do em but i noticed that Besar was doin the same thing as me (not usin bars) they yelled at him and he listened and his stuff is actually gettin pretty hot (good job man...im happy you stuck with it while i was bein stubburn) sooo i got a new word and im tryin to use bars...please tell me what to do to make bars easier instead of "keep doin em" if there even is anything more to it that that.
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ps: sorry for bein a stubburn ass toy haha...i wana get better and this seems to work and i think you guys can help me...so that is my first try at bars and the first try at the new word (changed words cause i didnt like the letters in Maste as much)
pps: my handwriting is shitty...yes
I'm digging everything but the H. Lol nice "Finally". As for the bars use that as a basic framework and start bending, twisting, warping, w/e you wanna do with your letters. The bars are just there to make sure your S still looks like an S when you are done with it. Good Luck.
work at its fineeeeest
i disagree. i dont like the arrows on the h and r on humor, but the nerd is some hot simples. maybe round out the bottom of the e though
Whats up guys I havent been on in forever...actually i had to get a new account name cause my old one wouldn't log on. Some of the people i saw starting really simple have gotten so clean. I wish i could have gotten but i got busted minorly and had to just give it up a while. i'm gonna post some stuff i did a couple months ago i'd appreciate some crits.
Oh Nekid: i really like that humor peice. i don't really feel the arrows mainly the one on the r put it's nice man and so are thosee simples.
good to be back
The pink rank with the lowercase r looks good but the r has that little thing coming off the side and it makes it seem like it is an f with the middle bar covered. I'm digging all of them though.
also did this to some old nikes with some crappy deco's that have been sitting around for months
not good but i was bored
Separate names with a comma.