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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. Infected

    Infected Banned

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    haze- pretty nice, but I'd leave the pics out.
    on the second one down, probably make your outline a lil bit thicker? Maybe it'd make it easier to read.
     
  2. garbage down tha way

    garbage down tha way Elite Member

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    been messing around with my throw alot more, i painted alot this weekend, ill have flicks up by tomorrow night hopefully. this throw is kinda rough, but the painted shit is on point. i promise.
    View attachment 322387

    infect- id change that name, its too long, and just ultimately a shitty name. on the other hand, keep working those simples, keep your letters the right way around, not backwards, and dont use characters yet until you're good at them.

    haze- that shits tight. id take the saw lookin thing of the h, and mess with your e more, but it's good so far, that style has potential. as for the middle one, id scrap that and keep developing the top and bottom shit.

    bigel, seize, sex-allll dope.
     
  3. HadeP

    HadeP Senior Member

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    Tez - your letters got mad floww good on ya, id say work on your e's a bit, they look kinda crammed in there, but it'll come
    mada - top ones dope, but the two, im assuming they're throws, could use some work, check the new to graff thread and work on bars
    bigel - always lovin your shit.
    haze - dont be stupid guy, if you plan to get big in graff even remotely, you will need to change your name, it doesnt matter if hes in new york or england, legends a legend.
    your still toy, loose some of the extentions on the ends of your letters.

    just a little throw and a hand style, stuck with a purple highlighter and a sharpy,
    ai172.photobucket.com_albums_w9_pphadee_Picture063.jpg
    crits comments opinions whatevessss
     
  4. SEIZE [reppin yo hood]

    SEIZE [reppin yo hood] Elite Member

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  5. Dying to live

    Dying to live Senior Member

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  6. MaNtS

    MaNtS Senior Member

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    yo akel didnt realise you posted on bs, long time since i last checked, anyways catchup soon,
    Heres something for a school banner, they pay the paint, i get time out of class, seems win-win to me.

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  7. BORG

    BORG Moderator

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  8. tempest

    tempest Senior Member

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    bump

    Amek. i like how u got that e character in there. u oughta make that into a sticker now
    cile - pretty simplistic but i like it. try putting the 3d the other way nd c how it looks.
    wentworth - ur background culd uses work
    akel - ur 'k' looks like an 'n'
    tempest - pretty wack dude
     
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  9. mas$

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  10. Rank-oner!

    Rank-oner! Senior Member

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    ^^^^ CILE: that is soooo clean. The simples look amazing and your 3d is dead on. I love it man.
    Mas$: really nice man i love that character. I think handstyle but you should see if you can make your own marker and have it drippy
     
  11. amk

    amk Elite Member

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    ...

    finished my christmas peice..
    in my new blackbook...my first ever one actually..

    View attachment 322482

    hope yall like.
     
  12. SEIZE [reppin yo hood]

    SEIZE [reppin yo hood] Elite Member

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    that cilestyle is hotness man.
    if thats the shit that comes from your mind at 6:30 in the morning, i say keep it up!
    hah

    amwha, thats probably my favorite thing ive seen from you. your fills are always banging.
     
  13. garbage down tha way

    garbage down tha way Elite Member

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    bump, got nothing.

    amk- i dont like how the tops of those letters are small and curved, other than that, santas arm is on backwards, and the rest looks dope.

    mass- i like the backround and color scheme, but i cant read the letters besides an a and an e.
     
  14. SkuzSCT

    SkuzSCT Senior Member

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    Starting with criyts for 2 pages back...

    Sivl - getting better every sketch, just don't stop going simple

    Fas - letters look good on their own, but thy don't flow with each other, ill Character

    Danker - stay more basic before you work with that style

    Haze - good style, but you need a name change and a reality check though, Writing haze when you know damn well there's already a legend with that name is pretty damn disrespectful

    Infect - keep developing your throws man, theyre not great yet, but if you keep at it you'll get better. Check all the bombing threads for influence

    Fen - Sick tag, okay throwie

    Sieze - not feeling that style it always seems to stay the same. Good fill though.

    Akel - sick piece, work on your tags

    mants - clean but very wiggles-like and not very flowy

    Borg - dope simpleness

    Seft make more even sized bars and focus on making them run paralell and shit this will give you more flow. Dont focus on extensions or hookups yet, they're just making your shit look uglier

    Mas$ - sick page, I'd do a throwie that looks really cloudy if i were you.

    AMK - sick other than some missing 3d near the santa hat.
     
  15. SkuzSCT

    SkuzSCT Senior Member

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    Oh yeah and Over - youve got a good throwie quit posting it though if you don't come up with new ideas for it, maybe yu don't get crits cuz its always the same
     
  16. SkuzSCT

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  17. garbage down tha way

    garbage down tha way Elite Member

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    ohhh shit i see it now. yeah well id make the bottom and top of the b visibly connected so it dont look like a p with an o under it. then, let the a be more visible, it's hiding behind the b. with the r, the right leg is soo dope but the cirlce around the r itself totaally kills it, just lose that and it will look better already.
     
  18. amk

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  19. Bazer

    Bazer Moderator

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    damn.. lots of nice stuff this page and the last one. i really like that gold skuz.

    so anyway, i busted this style not so long ago:
    ai190.photobucket.com_albums_z227_bazer6_ebook_SP_A1096.jpg

    and i didn't touch it with my name for a couple of weeks so i decided to do somethin today and it turned into this:

    ai190.photobucket.com_albums_z227_bazer6_ebook_SP_A1137.jpg
    and cuki
    ai190.photobucket.com_albums_z227_bazer6_ebook_SP_A1138.jpg


    does anyone think i should post in the big girl thread?
     
  20. danker17

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