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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. Pope

    Pope Member

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  2. 5Funerals

    5Funerals Senior Member

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    Pope - you need to erase all of what you think you know about graffiti and start completely new. Learn about letter structure and bars.

    BAZE - Your shit is incredible. Do you ever go bombing and have you ever pieced on a wall?

    Everyone esle - fucking dope

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    My letters got progressively bigger on this one by accident oh well.
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  3. Pope

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    Could you explain more on the topic.
     
  4. smooth_nuts

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  5. Infected

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    Damn, skuz. That shit is so clean. love the one on the far right. that fill is nice!
     
  6. IwriteNASR

    IwriteNASR Senior Member

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    mass-the canvas is fire.......handie in the box
    amk- one word. DOPE
    skuz- the gold simples my favorite nice tosses too
    baze-theyre all sick, i like the top and bottom one the best
    danker- idk not really feelin the style
    pope- dont blame it on the crayons, listen to smooth nuts
    rast- nice throw and fresh simples maybe tilt that T to balance it out
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  7. glyce

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    danker17- it looks cool but i think you should make the d fatter

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    any crits?
     
  8. IwriteNASR

    IwriteNASR Senior Member

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    edit
     
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  9. glyce

    glyce Senior Member

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    bumpin to a new page
     
  10. DEAR

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  11. Fube

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    CRITS

    * Give crits if you expect to receive them. What goes around comes around, don't expect everyone to go out of their way to give you crits if you aren't polite to enough to help others out. If asking for crits try and give crits to the last 5 or so picture posters.

    * Don't turn down crits from people who aren't as good as you. Just because their skill level is less doesn't mean your piece is flawless and they can't pick it out.
     
  12. Roolete

    Roolete Elite Member

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    dear i actually like your second one.. connect the bars of your e and take away of its long extension crossing the d, work on your a..maybe try uppercase? make the horizontal bar on the r a little bit thicker. at least thats what i'd do

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    what would jesus do
     
  13. Edward"Sezer"Hands

    Edward"Sezer"Hands Elite Member

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  14. Yukon

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    damn edward that cile style is fucking fire man bump
     
  15. Infected

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    glyce- It's okay, but I would try to loosen up your letters a little, make 'em flow a little better.

    Dear- Pretty good stuff, just watch your balance, the 'ear' tend to get bigger as you draw.

    Roolette- pretty nice, just watch your color combo.

    Sezer- Ill. Try changing up your style a little more, tho.
     
  16. Rank-oner!

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    Dear: def work on keeping the sizing consistant like on the first one the D is alot smaller, but nice simples.
    Tezer: top one is fire man i love those E's and the flow in the best out of the three you posted i think.
     
  17. Rank-oner!

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    AMK: i love that peice but i think there is some missing 3D at the tops of the letters cause you did one by the right side of the charac but not on the others. The fill is smokin though and im diggin the letters as well.
    Skuz: that gold one like everyone says is freakin orgasmic and you should hit that up somewhere.
    Baze: i love your letters but in the first one i feel like the B is a little small and on the second that there is some dead space between the B and the A. Really nice though man.
    Rast: you have good simples but i wouldnt overlap the 3D like that.
     
  18. Maste

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    I would just like to say to everyone here that it seems that everyone has been doing really good crits and it is appreciated. Keep up the good work everyone.

    Rast: dont put 3d over another part of a letter...just make it stop...it may look odd at first but t defianlty helps
    cile: you dont get crits cause your too amazing...
    tezer: those are hot man get some more color in there and itll be so freash
     
  19. BORG

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    tezer- your on some ill shit man, cant wait to see the style progress a bit more, thanks for sendin the sketches, theyre officially in the bbook :)

    really feelin the gold piece skuz, paint that shit
     
  20. shie-ster

    shie-ster Senior Member

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    THIS IS SMOOTH NUTS.he was having trouble with his computer so he had me post it for him.

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    smooth:"just a shitty d with shitty 3d.....im more worried about the stucture than 3d any way*sigh*oh well can i get some crits...sorry about the shitty webcam flick its all i gots to use at the moment"
     
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