top ones are good and the bottom is so dope but the bottom one has some structure issues you need to take care of if ur gonna feed it to a wall.
and clean ass throw. really decent.

 

pen sketch
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Diver, there ain't much to say really. You obviously have been refining your name to a point where I don't think I can offer much advice, me being so new. Sure your pen sketch ain't your best compared to what else you've put up but it's still nice.
Ante, I'm not really into that kind of style but It's still pretty dope. Looks sick actually.
Silent, your shit is clean also.

Puts my shit to shame. Ha it's all good just give me some time.

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I need practice. I'm aware some letters are out of proportion to.

 

sex no offence but dude it seems like you are posting the same picture every day and ide kind of like to see something new cause those characs are dope...

 

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this is a friends name she asked me to do 4 her.


shit looks lame. but oh well!

 

the sun will come out tommorow.
they are different, every one has something changed on it

 

I really like the characters. If you turned them into Vinyl toys I'd buy some. It would be kinda nice to see letters as apposed to characters from you though. I know I'm not one to talk since I don't regularly post my shit (and I mean SHIT) but you have this kinda generic feel to all of your characters and a break from them would be refreshing. No beef intended.

 

sex: i really love your characters i want to see one painted.
I was just sitting here on ebay and felt like sketching. Not like any of my other stuff and dont know why i sketched in this style. Let me know if its really close to someone elses cause I wasn't trying to bite and it was probably just subconscious. If its not then let me know how it looks for progression. It took about a min and a half and the N esp. is wack but lemme know.

 

looks pretty nice man maybe just make it a tid bit fatter

 

dude this is whack stop with that shit letters are whack and need alot of work

 

No it isnt wack, not even close, post your work, see what it is, is your jealous and want some attention so, you find something which is different and orignal and say its wack, i bet you feel like a real badman inside.

Revid- its hard to read i rekon make all the bars equal sizes so it flows more.
Rank- I like it but theres way to much space bring the letters closer together, it seems hard to belive you did it tho when you see the other doodles on the page tho.

 

SEX dun worry love the dope shit

rank looking great add some 3d HANDI IS DOPE AS FUCK

crappy lil shit thing i messed up the top of the T isnt suposed t ocover the top bar of the C but w.e prolly just throw it out neway

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<3 x2 haha I like it, the pink looks awesome bro. work on ur W and the top right extensions.

you still need to do me one!!!! I made a sticker for you and me and you need to do the same.!!!



Well anyways this is for you bazE... SHAKE AND BAKE
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it looked a lil too plane so i added some pizazz
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B looks funny, and Z could be a little bigger

 

some stuff i've been working on. my other moniker, times.

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and a sketch for the stroud battle i didn't have time to finish. scud's coming back in feb.

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haze, nice simple style. i can see where this will evolve to something.
the silent vandal, crisp style as well. wouldn't look bad on a wall at all.
sex without condoms, i don't really get that particular style, but it looks well done.
rank, that kind of font would look really hot for a stencil, but not sure if its right for a piece. but if you can rock it, don't sweat it.
originalcin, no offense but i have no idea what your friends name is. i can't read that.

cheers.

 

i cant believe you guys dont get raoes. style. it one of the most unique ones on here.

hal.cyon thats good man. your letters could use work but everyone gets better. dont get me wrong its badass but i know youre still going with progression. =]

heres one for sex without condoms.
>_< so many vowels!



and kils. you cant see yours yet. cuz im not done =P

 

hal.cyon - Looks like you need to keep it down on the arrows and add-ons.

 

Haz-e: thanks for the crits man and yours is lookin really nice. I agree with you though the T is a little weird lookin but maybe you could just change the C up a little and might not have to worry much about the T. The 3d is really nice too.
FLuffy Bunnies: i like the simples but i do agree and think the B might look a little more squared off and the Z could be a little bit bigger, but those splatters look hot! haha i guess im just a sucker for splatters.
Hal.cyon: that sketch is fresh man im liking it a lot. Thanks for the crits. I really like your character in the 2nd one.
Baze: im really diggin that top one, i really like the flow