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and mass appeal your letter structures lookin aight on the bottom AMK

 

looks a shitload like 666gesus

 

what do u mean properly? it seems like your the only one who has a problem with my letter structure. have u ever seen an old school ny blockbuster? thats where i got the idea for the cracks.
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not exactly oldschool but it works for the example.

 

cracks are kinda over used i think is what he was saying and if your going to do cracks you need to learn to do them more like that one with them going from fat to skinny and having small shadows and highlights or otherwise they kinda just look like regular lines. i like it though man it would be good letters for a roller piece

 

those throws are creative. good stuff

haha idk what i was doin, but there is symbolism(not on purpose)

the n is a dove with a christmas tree on its back and the other letters are looking up at it.

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wat if ur really in no position to be crit no ones work. i do wanna give bad advice. i just want a crit!

 

well then until you learn what you think is good advice tell people what you think looks good to you and even if you think something looks weird or you think someone should do something a little different say it because sometimes even new people can find stuff people might over look

 

thanks Sen..feel the throw as always.

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Sen..im still waiting for my peice <8

 

WTF are you talking about it's as simple as it gets and I used bars in a way, but I curved them and shit.. the same thing you did...
you sure you know what you're talking about?

 

Alright you used bars but I think your D and V need the most work and your E needs to get shrunk.

 

yeah the D looks like a P

 

AMK, really digging those WHA throws.
Sen, also like your throws and simple style.
AVID 1, try more straightened bars, and stay consistent on the width of the bars throughout the whole piece.

 

AMK: finished your piece hope you like it

 

that amk looks dope maaaan
i like the colors

 

Thanks man it took me a while to get the fill in the 3d right.
Dave: i would try to make that e smaller and maybe try straight letters using bars cause im not feeling the rounded ones there. good blend though. keep working man
and im bumping this while im at it cause i want some more crits

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Dude thats fresh
but all your letters are like »/« and the N is like »|«

sorry I dont know how to say that in proper English i hope you know what i mean

 

Letter E i Started on, thought i show u before i fuck it up.

 

what the hell guys.
i remeber when id post something in this htread then go back to sleep..there'd be 7 more full pages of flicks and crits ..

anways
ILL ^^^^^^^^
you have a dope style.
i think you shud keep dong what your doing without addons personally..it looks great without them...i also think theyd make your style unbalanced becase all your letters are in the same height widths etc. but yeah whatever ahaha