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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. faTTYYY

    faTTYYY Senior Member

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    diggin the 1st piece by same
     
  2. a maze

    a maze Banned

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  3. Rank-oner!

    Rank-oner! Senior Member

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    Bazer: im likin that R alot :) but how come the E is lower case?
    FATTTY: without a bottom i cant tell what it says might have potential but give crits to get them
    SAme: lookin real good. likin the simps
    And i dont see anything alike in that painted piece to Cher but the top of the E and thats about it.
    Maze: i like what your coming up with but i think the Z could use a little work on being more defined as a Z but i like that throw style a lot
     
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  4. -Leski

    -Leski Senior Member

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    Nice stuff a maze, the drop shadow on your tear is a little odd looking though. not a big deal.

    The letters are hot.

    @Same, I like the first simple, just make all the letters the same size ans touch up the right side of the A (make the right leg longer) and the start of the M. (make the left leg less rounded)
    Edit, maybe make the prongs on the E deeper.

    Bumpity because I'd like a few critz if anyone has any for me.
     
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  5. a maze

    a maze Banned

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    Rank- yeah, I get what you're sayin about the z, have any suggestions on how I could fit it?
     
  6. Roolete

    Roolete Elite Member

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  7. SEZ

    SEZ Senior Member

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    yours is better who cares^^^hahaha
     
  8. Rank-oner!

    Rank-oner! Senior Member

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    Maze well this is sketch as shit cause i just did a quick idea and i cant do your style but maybe this will give you some ideas or something
    [Broken External Image]:http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r258/rank1234/maze001.jpg
    and Roolete his Top part is but so many people use that shape E with it curving up on the bottom bar and even that and your middle bar is different
     
  9. Evasion Of Invasion

    Evasion Of Invasion Senior Member

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  10. STAR01

    STAR01 Senior Member

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    EVA; that shit looks tight, but i think you should lose the "snaketail"
    SAme; i like that second one alot maybe make a bit more background with that blue??

    some shit i draw at school crits??
    [Broken External Image]:http://img167.imageshack.us/img167/4864/1002343tx0.jpg
     
  11. spuzzy

    spuzzy Member

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    reminds me of those black and pink boxes of camels. i like it.
     
  12. c.n.k

    c.n.k Member

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  13. BlackBookCook420

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  14. Carbon2

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  15. BlackBookCook420

    BlackBookCook420 Member

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    I got a problem with that hahah im colorblind...
     
  16. 5Funerals

    5Funerals Senior Member

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    Haha Carbon your colors are worse. I think you should go to the new to graff thread because its very very helpful. It will teach you all about bars and letter structure and simples. You should be drawing was simpler things and dont bother coloring yet because letters should come first.
     
  17. loser.

    loser. Guest

    hes from toronto, and sez your a moron
     
  18. BlackBookCook420

    BlackBookCook420 Member

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  19. SEZ

    SEZ Senior Member

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    i'm gonna ignore this before you turn it into another one of
    your gay ebitch fights
     
  20. loser.

    loser. Guest

    how about you just stay in this thread till your not such a fucking toy, come out when u dont suck so badly