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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.
kk thanks hoss
You people are all cunts you never crit people who ask for it fuck the lot of you.
Fatty- give up its fucking awful i mean anything that once looked good in a throwie youve ruined.
beyond- if your not proud of it dont post it you WANKSTAIN!
revid- new to graff thread do simples or make it clearer i dont know what it is.
Tricks you had this runing smoothly before you left, its turnt to shit now.
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Blackbookcook420- SIMPLES, man. Simples.
EDIT- might change my name, haven't decided... The 'z' is real hard to make flow with the other letters, so here's a REAL QUICK sketch of a name I might use-MAKR
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now now made..be nice...but i hope your talking about the thread and not my style lol
alright alright...listen up ladies and gents...this used to be a place to come and get your shit torn to scraps..and in the process learn a thing or two, its now turned into a joke, as its bump after bump of "LOOK AT MY TOY SHIT!" and im guilty of it too...so..this is how you crit:
Borg: the letters in your throw are there, but it looks too smooth, almost like you pounded it out on the keyboard, which is just my opinion...but i prefer the grimeyness of throws as well, they gotta have some sex appeal, because if you cant paint that clean AND fast..then its gunna either look like shit. or youre gunna get booked
Underground animal: that shits pretty nice son, once again its got a little more flair than Borgs, but its still cartoonish and gets its style from how clean it is, so be careful of trying to make a throw look perfect, you feel me?
Fail, im not a fan of your style really at all, unless its done EXTREMELY well, but i mean you obviously know what youre doing, and your handstyle is off the chain, youre good, its just my opinion so i dont really know how i can give you criticism
Made..the colours are cool, and the letters flow with each other, but individually they need hella work, that lump on the A has got to go, make the E even more simpler, and that I needs som serious work
revid and beyond, all im gunna say to you 2 is that you need to calm down and go back to basics, BASIC LETTERS, like on your FUCKING keyboards, dont post again until your shit looks simple as fuck
fatty, youre a perfect example of what borgs throwup might look like if he painted it..fucking sloppy..wheres the effort? youve got some decent letters but take some fucking time before you push the scan button
and amaze, keep it up, space out the holes in your letters more, like the A and R, but other than that keep it simple
Yeah, thanks tricks, will do. It was a real quick sketch anyways, just wanted to get it out, you know?
and about the thread, I think we should make it to where we HAVE to crit the first 5 people before you, therefore, everyone gets some love!
Made- good to see you trying out new styles of letters, the bottom right of the E is too curled up though, you should try making the back bone of the E the same shape as the right upward bar of the a to give a cemetrical feel and then maybe give the top of the right a similar shape to the top left of the A, after try making the T Flow cemetrically between the two letters. Ill do a quick sketch if you dont understand haha.
Tricks- I really like your new style, haven't really seen alot of your old.
New flick, the letters arent really descending, my scanner caught the pic at an angle.
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remindes me of wutang, idk why.
and yeah, stick with maze, all of those sketches were fire.
wow, thanks. which ones? tosses? Reason why I changed was because I couldn't get the z to flow worth a shit.
maze - the MA are deffinately youre stronger letters
new style, i dunno if i saw it somewhere or not but here.
just started to sketch about 6 months ago
i seem fucken bad compared to you guys
what do you guys think ?
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and my friends really into the newstream, as i call "shit" hip hop and wanted me to sketch up some rappers
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letters suck i know.
any suggestions ?
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tried to make my ltters flow into a flower LIVE.ONE
nah your throwies i hated for maze
but your pieces, damn.
they were all sexy....like Rots.
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trying to progress my style, but not really happy with anything im producing..
ahh i quit sketching for a bit and then came back to it with a new word, wat do you think?
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Simples from yesterday and today... or yesterday and the day before...
Anyways, just moved onto bars from super simps and blockbuster styles... There a tad wack but oh well, i'll get it down eventualy. practice practice ext.
from oldest to newest, top to bottom.
any critz to help me out?
Foone- I like your simple under the spray can, dont care for how the R and E are linked but I geuss the R's leg would kill the flow if it was hangin.
Zombi- Nice bubbles, fatten up your I. Keep perportions in mind, the Z is way big and the o is tiny. It doesnt look bad but it would probly look better.
I'm new to this forum but yea, heres a quickie 5-8 minute sketch, with a pen.
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leski - my favourite is the third one up until the K, which i think looks bad due to the bottom legs pointing in different directions and it doesnt maintain "flow"
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