its good cept for the thing on the side. emels peice is the sex any crits for mine?im not happy with the lettering
Rup'e: nice characters but work on your letter structure. Rhyseitup: i think it says rhyse but its kinda hard to read 3d looks ok though Lope: im not diggin the extension off the M but simps still lookin good. Roolete: i cant tell much now, maybe ink it up. Borg: know his shit is ill Evade: im not feelin the A D E maybe connect them or something. Revid: i was saying on your throws the G looks kinda like a C So i promised AMK i would get one up tonight haha left off the extensions really though. i have one but its way overboard hit me up with them crits
Rank: Thats really nice work with the colors^ Also like how you amde it seem like hands were gripping the letters. Rupe: Nice characs, but the letters are very bad. Raket: Shits fresh, would love to see it colored.
ha thanks but they're not hands. they are just stretches or connections but the one on the K kinda looks like a hand the flash took the color away some but you can see closer
Rank- Would love to see that on a wall..But I'm not feelin the red outline though..maybe a different colour?
I see. The one on the K does look very very much like a hand, xept it has an extra finger lol. The one on the A would be the add on im not really feeling. but its all good. Ima try and get some of my stuff up soon. Did graff for a few months back in 9th grade, now im starting it up again
twisties-stick with the simples the other shit is just kinda bleh rank-i i like it but whats up with the little lines where the top part of the a connects and shit it looks weird just muh throw desided to post out of bordem haha crits would be loverly....
ABOUT that sketch isnt bad actully its a pretty nice style i hate the B and if u make all the widths of the letters the same it will look pretty dopeI say do it again and use some of my advice and i think you will have something going man
Smooth_nuts - Thats a solid throw. Go paint it Here's some of my stuff, been a long time since i last wrote. Pigment ink and fluorescent highlighters suck when scanned, gotta keep that in mind [Broken External Image]:http://i147.photobucket.com/albums/r304/KoreTwo/scan0007.jpg -- [Broken External Image]:http://i147.photobucket.com/albums/r304/KoreTwo/rekone1.jpg ^Messed up the 3d on the N in the second one. Crits pls.
rank- decent simple. maybe try to give the letters a little more movement. they seem really stiff. you could try some variation on the width of your bars and moving the letters around to fit into each other better. about- definitely try to develop that more. like haz-e said, try to keep the width of the letters the same or atleast consistent and that will be fire. xyk- i would just say simplify your style for now, it needs some structure badly bump n grind for crits.
lope: the tail on the m looks yucky (yes i use that word haha) smooth:its nice but the O with the grr is kinda overplayed ...that dosnt stop it from lookin good rank: haha i love that style...the shineys arre a tad to big but its cool ...paint it
sume- damn, its nice to finally see something from you, thats looking good, like the concept chalk- looking good, the leg of the l looks odd, back????? haha keep pumpin that fresh shit out for me fazed- its comin along girl, keep the bars the same thickness for now, and all the letters the same height, and try to get them about the same width, dont rep nc????? lmfao
[Broken External Image]:http://img139.imageshack.us/img139/8836/rosyoneos1.jpg a random drawing i did for my bitch during finals.
Chalk: Looks dope Fazed and Steyr: Simples. Steyr you kinda went over wit the extensions. Do simples Fazed looking better but next time make sure the A looks like an A. Still ur getting simples better keep practicing